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I Thought I Was Dreaming

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Manifested Destiny
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0 posted 01-30-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Manifested Destiny   Email Manifested Destiny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manifested Destiny

I Thought I Was Dreaming

I thought I was dreaming
But then i realized
Almost as if struck by lighting
That this was definitely reality
The man in my deepest desires has manifested
Like a sudden storm
The realization hit
That he is the one
The one my soul longed for
His essence has manifested for me
And
My soul longs no more


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1 posted 01-30-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, MD!! This is lovely! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
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2 posted 01-30-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MD-
Welcome to Passion's.
Nice entrance.
Hope to see more.
~*Marge*~


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This is lovely...to find what you've been waiting for!!! Welcome to passions!!!

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Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.
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Thanks for the warm responses! I already feel like a member of the family. I am a "newbie" a writing poetry, but since I met my soulmate my heart is just overwhelmed with things to say! Thanks again for the warm responses! You all really know how to make a girl feel welcomed!
Beri
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6 posted 01-30-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Welcome!  Its nice to know you had such a great inspiration for your writings!  I loved this piece, and can't wait to see more.  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

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MD, I am so glad you found your hearts desire! Welcome to Passions...... I'll be looking for more ..... -SEA
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Truly beautiful!  Welcome to passions, we're glad to see you here!  Btw, I love the screen name!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

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9 posted 01-31-2000 12:54 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Great poem, you will be very welcome here at passions
Me2
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MD~
My first poem and my first day here too!  I love the people already and they have become very inspirational!  You'll see!!
You are feeling what I am feeling also! You said a lot of what I wanted to say. You got the gift! Looking forward to many more from you!
Paul  ( alias Me2)  
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11 posted 01-31-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

MD!  Clarification ... I'm feeling the same about a "woman" I just met.  I read your poem again and realized what I said in the reply sounded ...  a little funny!  LOL
Sorry.
Paul
 
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