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On Spider's Webs
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On Spider's Webs |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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On Spider's Webs On sunlit afternoons when my mellow mood envelopes me lifting my spirits on floating spider's webs freeing me from life like a balloonist tossing ballast for an altitude high to look at things from a superior perspective Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beauitful, Robert! Those higher perspectives sure help, don't they? Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
the higher the better...wanna get high???? hehehehe j/k |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love to go with you! I need a lift. I liked your poem - a lot Liz |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sure! I'm ready!  hehehe j/k |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Robert, Ballooninst flies high in sky overhead Lofty perceptions below tethered to the earth by floating spiders webs One moment of lofty heights and then time to make the slow decent into the world of realism again I like your style, my friend ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your mellow mood was very well expressed here, Robert. Simple, eloquent, beautiful. Claire (isn't Marge's visual verse neat?) (o: |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I will have to defer to you to tell me about the beauty on high...I am terrified of high places!!!! Your lovely poem is as close as I want to get! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hello Robert Thankyou for for the invite ... this mile high ride in your balloon is far beyond the expectations of this lowly fish. Wow ... and your poem is good too! Thanks ... Rex |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Robert Flying high enough, one might not even need a spider's web ! Beautiful imagry ! I enjoyed it a lot ! Safwan |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks guys and gals!!! OK Denise!! Welcome Rex!!!! Ms. Devine.....you should see what I do for a living!!!! (if you are scared of heights that is) Elizabeth, let's go! Marge what an exclamation you make!Safwan....here in the midwest on October afternoons a certain type of spider lets out a single strand of web that the wind will carry him to wherever he wishes. Robert |
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