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One Rose Away From Loving You

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Marge Tindal
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One Rose Away From Loving You
~Marge Tindal~


Borne on wings of petaled rose
the love I have grows and grows
Reaching places within my heart
that will not let your memory part
Petals falling open-faced, laced with
beauty they represent On love sent  
Their fragrance reaching far into the
night, touching noses with delight
Far away, you must know,
delight sent wafting
on this rose
just one
rose

~l~
~l~
~away~  l  ~from~
~loving~~~you~
~l~
~l~
l
l
l
l
~l~

                  




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Marge,
Beautiful poem and presentation. *L* Sy
Gene
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Wow, Marge, great. This is something I have to print out and frame.

Now, I think you may have started something. If Sherry's watching, she's probably gonna want to compete.  

~Gene

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Such a beautiful way to present a beautiful poem!
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4 posted 01-30-2000 04:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Marge! This is beautiful! The words and the formatting!! WOW!!

Denise
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beautifully done.
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A rose so nice described in form
This love should waether every strom
Excellent

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Oh Marge...are you ever creative...this is really something very special...with Valentines Day coming up...this would make a really gorgeous card...
I'm in awe...
Elizabeth Santos
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I agree with Pepper, this is so special, only from your pen, Marge.
Liz
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Seymour-
Thank you, love.

Gene-
Well, thank you so much.

Balladeer-
Thanks, Luv.
Especially glad you liked.

Mike-
Thank you.

Helmut-
What a sweetie you are.

Pepper-
Thank YOU.  After all, you were the
reason I got this idea anyway.
My little ~Muse~.
Sad thing is that Passion's cards
don't format. *boo-hoo*


Elizabeth-
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 01-30-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

hehehe.....hey, Marge...you forgot me! I'm up there!! (just wanted to let you know I did respond!)  

Denise
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This is beautiful Marge, love the rose, and love your presentation!!!! Now how good do you do dandelions??

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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DENISE -
I KNOW, I KNOW ... I APOLOGIZE !
Heck, I even was thinking of something
special to say for your great big WOW !
In my defense ... I had to let my pup out.
I LOVE YOU, DENISE !


Devina-
I think I could do it 'JUST DANDY'
You first !
LOL !
~*Marge*~


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A most beautiful poem Marge and a beautiful way to present it!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Dark Angel-
Thanks for the like.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I LOVE YOU TOO, MARGE!!  

Denise
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Well, I guess you knew that I would love this poem.  We have many come to our shop who are one rose away ...and we provide it.   Lovely poem Marge!
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Denise-
LOL !  Me MORE !

Martie-
Awwwwww !  
Yes, and it would look good
on your shop wall !
You're such a sweetheart.
I did think of you as I was
'arranging' it.
Whew !  Makes me appreciate
my florist more!
~*Marge*~


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CONGRATULATIONS MARGE ON PASSING 2000 POSTS!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO WAY TO GO GIRL!!

Denise
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Denise-
Thank you, gal.
Seems to be so easy to read so
many lovely poems.
I am so very pleased to be
in this family ...
a family of friends, indeed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is so grand, Marge...Fantastically designed with a heartful message.  THIS is where true inspiration is spawned.  
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Sherry-
Thank you.  That is a very nice
thing for you to say.
I hope it inspires you.
The toys Ron gives us to play with
here have taken some of my words
and 'dressed' 'em up real purty !

The words come quickly and easily,
the design takes a little more
manuevering.  It's so much fun.
And it slows down my posting ...
heck, I write so quickly I'd flood
these forums if they'd let me !
Thanks again ...
how's the 'cabin fever'?
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Outstanding Marge...you always provide such smiles for our hearts. Thank you!

Claire
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Beautiful!!!
I am much impressed!!!

Alina
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Claire-
What a wonderful thing for you to say.
I have lots of smiles to share with you all.

Alina-
Welcome to Passion's.
Thank you for liking this.
Hope we'll see more of you.
~*Marge*~


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