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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-01-30 03:57 PM


One Rose Away From Loving You
~Marge Tindal~


Borne on wings of petaled rose
the love I have grows and grows
Reaching places within my heart
that will not let your memory part
Petals falling open-faced, laced with
beauty they represent On love sent  
Their fragrance reaching far into the
night, touching noses with delight
Far away, you must know,
delight sent wafting
on this rose
just one
rose

~l~
~l~
~away~  l  ~from~
~loving~~~you~
~l~
~l~
l
l
l
l
~l~

                  




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-01-30 04:03 PM


Marge,
Beautiful poem and presentation. *L* Sy

Gene
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2 posted 2000-01-30 04:05 PM


Wow, Marge, great. This is something I have to print out and frame.

Now, I think you may have started something. If Sherry's watching, she's probably gonna want to compete.  

~Gene


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3 posted 2000-01-30 04:14 PM


Such a beautiful way to present a beautiful poem!
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-30 04:26 PM


Oh, Marge! This is beautiful! The words and the formatting!! WOW!!

Denise

Mike
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5 posted 2000-01-30 04:31 PM


beautifully done.
HelmutB
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6 posted 2000-01-30 04:39 PM


A rose so nice described in form
This love should waether every strom
Excellent

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Pepper
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7 posted 2000-01-30 04:48 PM


Oh Marge...are you ever creative...this is really something very special...with Valentines Day coming up...this would make a really gorgeous card...
I'm in awe...

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-01-30 04:52 PM


I agree with Pepper, this is so special, only from your pen, Marge.
Liz

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9 posted 2000-01-30 05:12 PM


Seymour-
Thank you, love.

Gene-
Well, thank you so much.

Balladeer-
Thanks, Luv.
Especially glad you liked.

Mike-
Thank you.

Helmut-
What a sweetie you are.

Pepper-
Thank YOU.  After all, you were the
reason I got this idea anyway.
My little ~Muse~.
Sad thing is that Passion's cards
don't format. *boo-hoo*


Elizabeth-
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Denise
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10 posted 2000-01-30 05:20 PM


hehehe.....hey, Marge...you forgot me! I'm up there!! (just wanted to let you know I did respond!)  

Denise

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11 posted 2000-01-30 05:20 PM


This is beautiful Marge, love the rose, and love your presentation!!!! Now how good do you do dandelions??

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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12 posted 2000-01-30 05:25 PM


DENISE -
I KNOW, I KNOW ... I APOLOGIZE !
Heck, I even was thinking of something
special to say for your great big WOW !
In my defense ... I had to let my pup out.
I LOVE YOU, DENISE !


Devina-
I think I could do it 'JUST DANDY'
You first !
LOL !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-01-30 05:26 PM


A most beautiful poem Marge and a beautiful way to present it!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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14 posted 2000-01-30 05:31 PM


Dark Angel-
Thanks for the like.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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15 posted 2000-01-30 05:33 PM


I LOVE YOU TOO, MARGE!!  

Denise

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16 posted 2000-01-30 05:40 PM


Well, I guess you knew that I would love this poem.  We have many come to our shop who are one rose away ...and we provide it.   Lovely poem Marge!
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17 posted 2000-01-30 05:46 PM


Denise-
LOL !  Me MORE !

Martie-
Awwwwww !  
Yes, and it would look good
on your shop wall !
You're such a sweetheart.
I did think of you as I was
'arranging' it.
Whew !  Makes me appreciate
my florist more!
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2000-01-30 06:49 PM


CONGRATULATIONS MARGE ON PASSING 2000 POSTS!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO WAY TO GO GIRL!!

Denise

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19 posted 2000-01-30 06:57 PM


Denise-
Thank you, gal.
Seems to be so easy to read so
many lovely poems.
I am so very pleased to be
in this family ...
a family of friends, indeed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-01-30 10:07 PM


This is so grand, Marge...Fantastically designed with a heartful message.  THIS is where true inspiration is spawned.  
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21 posted 2000-01-30 11:04 PM


Sherry-
Thank you.  That is a very nice
thing for you to say.
I hope it inspires you.
The toys Ron gives us to play with
here have taken some of my words
and 'dressed' 'em up real purty !

The words come quickly and easily,
the design takes a little more
manuevering.  It's so much fun.
And it slows down my posting ...
heck, I write so quickly I'd flood
these forums if they'd let me !
Thanks again ...
how's the 'cabin fever'?
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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22 posted 2000-01-30 11:28 PM


Outstanding Marge...you always provide such smiles for our hearts. Thank you!

Claire

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23 posted 2000-01-30 11:50 PM


Beautiful!!!
I am much impressed!!!

Alina

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Claire-
What a wonderful thing for you to say.
I have lots of smiles to share with you all.

Alina-
Welcome to Passion's.
Thank you for liking this.
Hope we'll see more of you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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25 posted 2000-01-31 12:23 PM


This is done so very beautifully~

I am very impressed~

Marie~

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Marie~
I'm so glad you found it so appealing.
Welcome to our Passion's family.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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27 posted 2000-09-23 03:34 PM


So very beautiful in content and graphic content.  No one does them better than you.
Marge Tindal
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28 posted 2000-09-24 12:20 PM


MarkB~
Thank you, sweetie~
This one was not only one of my early attempts, but my favorite still.
I just KNEW you'd like it.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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29 posted 2000-10-01 05:35 PM



I was strolling through the archives and look what I came upon!  I can't believe that I missed this. Marge,  this is stunning in presentation (you are one of the most creative people I know) and in wording.  I love this! You are a rose yourself you know  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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Marge Tindal
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30 posted 2001-02-17 05:08 PM


Melissa~
I am so pleased the archives are here ...
what joy in finding such pleasurable replies.
Thank you, dear.

This one is among my personal formatted favorites.
Appreciate knowing it's beauty is shared.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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31 posted 2001-02-19 05:11 PM


Beautiful expression and presentation...
Thank you PoetFriend for this delightful read...
~coco~

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I thought I caught a whiff of spring back here.....
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