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Too Painful Is The Waking (RG's Challenge)

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First__Knight
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25 posted 02-01-2000 03:34 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Cherished dream.  Tell me more so I know what I am doing wrong here.    Fabulous Denise  

 I used to be schizophrenic, but we're ok now so don't make me mad cause I'm running out of places to hide the bodies......LOL


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26 posted 02-01-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Marie and David for your kind words! I'm glad you liked it!        
Denise
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27 posted 02-01-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A very exquiste poem Denise. You're a great dreamer.

 Nathan
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28 posted 02-01-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Nate! You always say the sweetest things!
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Oh Denise! This is truly beautiful!!! What a picture you painted!
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30 posted 02-01-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks, Rebecca!! I'm glad you liked it.  

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31 posted 02-01-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Denise, this is beautiful - as always.  Then again, I am a dreamer too.    I've been out of commission for awhile so it looks like I have some reading catching up to do!
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32 posted 02-01-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome back, Eloise! I missed you! Thanks for reading and for your kind comments!  

Denise
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33 posted 02-01-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Denise, perfectly romantic!   -SEA
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Awe I really liked this one Very Romantic..

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35 posted 02-01-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Sea and Tori! I'm glad you found it romantic!  

Denise
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36 posted 02-01-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

I had to reply to this poem.  How beautifully you write.  I enjoyed reading this one.
Sally S.
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Yes, it is romantic, Denise.

..."I like dreamin'....'cause dreamin' can make you mine...."  Love how your poems evoke memories!!  Wonderful, as always.  
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Thank you, January and Sally for your kind comments! I'm glad you liked it! And welcome to Passions, January!

Denise
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This is lovely Denise
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Thanks so much, J., for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

Denise
 
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