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When Time Stands Still...

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Julie
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0 posted 01-30-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

When Time Stands Still...

There is no clock in these momements of serinity,
they go on throughout eternity.
Focus on the rose petal in your room,
the magical creation of the velveteen perfume.
Look just beyond your own backyard,
see the highest majesty, the mountain standing guard.
As night stands still bringing in the moon,
close your eyes and feel your heart swell like a balloon.
The moment you actually heard, your best friend's laughter,
remember how you teared, knowing it wouldn't last forever.
Go inside, gaze into the eyes of innocence,
that is dependent on you for all this child's essence.
Remember the time you felt all the world was fake,
then you escaped and found the quiet rippling of the lake.
Running about just for fun, dancing in the rain,
feeling glory and freedom upon God's refrain.
Laying quietly about to sleep and feeling his hand upon your hair,
yes, you say, I am safe; in the arms of someone who cares.
You lost everything on that miserable day,
then he reached out and touched your hand in that special way.
The final words of one's destiny, and they whisper,
"I love you"
I hope this will always be in your memory.  


 Julie
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[i]Your most prized possessions will be what you hold in your heart not in your hand.


© Copyright 2000 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-30-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hi Julie!! Great to see you here again!!
This is absolutely breathtaking!! It is so beautiful!!

Denise
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2 posted 01-30-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I agree. This is a stunning poem....a work to be proud of.
Pepper
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3 posted 01-30-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Julie, it 'is' so nice to see you here!
And what a very beautiful poem,to come back with...
This piece is wonderful!....
RobertB
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4 posted 01-30-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Very nice Julie.....I really enjoyed this.

Robert
Gene
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5 posted 01-30-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

All I need say is DITO to the above. Very nice.  

~Gene

BTW, hello, Julie nice to meet ya.
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6 posted 01-30-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Julie-
This is just too pretty.
Back to the top it goes !
Nice to meet you too.
~*Marge*


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Julie
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7 posted 01-30-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Denise, you are breath-taking. Thank you dear friend. You can't believe how much I miss being here regualarly. I do get a chance occassionally to pop in and read a few.
'deer, It is a really great day when I see your comments on my posts. Thank you.
Pepper, my dear sweet friend thank you too.
Robert, glad you enjoyed. the reasons I write.
Gene, nice to meet you too. I'm sure you know by now what a wonderful place this is.
Marge, it has been to long since I've been here, telling me nice to meet ya...I remember how beautiful you write.    
deleeme
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8 posted 01-30-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Julie, I just came across this and it was stunning reminescent-a beautiful piece.  I think you are most talented in your ability to express things. David
Julie
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9 posted 02-01-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

You are so sweet David...thank you.
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