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Love, A Memory

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Safwan Arekat
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Love, A Memory

I remember love very well


I remember the love that I felt
You were very close to me then
A memory in my heart is kept
A memory from a dreamy heaven

I remember you talking to me
with your brown eyes smiling
and conceded to unspoken plea
as you moved into closer filing

I whispered a hushed tone in your ear
You allowed me a hesitant approach
aside you had brushed a strand of hair
"tell me, and fear not a reproach"

How had they been in wit abound?
those words I said to win your laugh
My heart a dance to twirl around
at music in the trumpetís draft  

Ever so more I was mighty pleased
in joy I bathed and in glee I basked
as a touch of silken skin appeased
the prayer which my god I asked

*

"Silence there in the third row"
A voice interrupted our  rejoicing
"I told you to keep your voices low"
The teacher kept on harassing


But I remember love very well


Safwan Arekat
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 01-30-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Safwan, sweetness overflowing.

Claire
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-30-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is absolutely delightful.
You made me smile
Liz
Denise
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3 posted 01-30-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This brought a smile to my heart as well!! Wow and what an ending!!                    

Denise
mariee66
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4 posted 01-31-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

I think I remember that love too~

Very nicely written~
Marie~
Zelda
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5 posted 02-01-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for Zelda   Email Zelda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zelda

This was beautiful reading.... my first one, and I'm awed!

Z
LngJhnAg
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6 posted 02-01-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Saf - great read, and it does bring out the old memories.

Zelda - welcome to the Forums - I hope we find your poetry in here often.  Just a friendly word of advice, however.  There is a poet in here named Toerag (yes, Toerag).  He is a rascal and a scalawag.  If he says anything to you, just let me know and I will gladly give you the correct interpretation.  Remember, his name is Toerag *wink* and he's a devil!  He's also a good friend of mine, but don't hold that against me - OK?
SEA
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with you


7 posted 02-01-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Safwan, this was incredibly sweet. I am such a sucker for romance!   -SEA
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-04-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Safwan how can you keep your mind on your studies
if you are admiring the college lovelies?

I know...in life we both love to learn and learn to Love(laugh)....James
THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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9 posted 12-03-2003 05:55 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

i am sure he can
 
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