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Whole in My Heart

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Safwan Arekat
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Whole in My Heart

Imagination draws the picture that I see
one that confines and subjugates me
painting You by light reflected into my eye
or the spirit of the soul my twain to be

In my Imagination arises a nagging doubt
Who in Creations presence am I looking at
An Angel sent through heavens gate
or the many names of memories past

In my imagination
I can take you apart

But whole you remain
in my heart


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Meadowmuse
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A reflective and well expressed piece, Safwan. Wonderfully titled, as well.

Claire
Elizabeth Santos
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This is beautiful poetry
Liz
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I agree! This is fabulous, Safwan!

Denise
JamesMichael
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Wonderful truth Safwan.  A pleasure to read..James
Marge Tindal
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Safwan-
Lovely lines holding truth.
~*Marge~>/b>


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Ah! I like this...nicely written.  
 
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