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Meadowmuse
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0 posted 01-30-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse



Dreamlight



Illuminated
above
us
a dreamlight
glows.
My lover
knows
the bathe
and flow
of
my
shadow.

Dear LadyClaire





[This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 01-30-2000).]
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Martie
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1 posted 01-30-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lovely vision, Claire.
Master
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2 posted 01-30-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I'm not a big fan of free verse, but this painted quiete a picture! Nice one!
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 01-30-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

So vivid a picture in so few words
. Beautiful.
Liz
RobertB
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4 posted 01-30-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

very nice Claire.....and with few words!!! hehehe you know I like that part!

Robert
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Simply beautiful, as always, Claire!!    

Denise
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6 posted 01-30-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Claire-
Refreshingly simplistic.
The quiet images float so easily.
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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7 posted 01-30-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Me liked.  
HelmutB
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8 posted 01-30-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Beautiful yet short
saying so much with just a few lines
A poem of a special sort
"The bathe and flow" wow



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Meadowmuse
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9 posted 01-30-2000 04:40 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Martie...thank you!

Master...I am not actually a big "writer" of free verse. I just sometimes like to dab my pen into a little unrestrained ink and see what flows. (o:

Liz...thank you so much...glad you enjoyed this little thingy.

Robert...thank you. Sometimes only a few words are necessary, you think?  

Denise...thank you, your words are always appreciated.

Marge...thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's different from what I've been writing lately.

Claire
Meadowmuse
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Thank you, Mike!

Helmut...thank you, my friend.

Claire
mariee66
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11 posted 01-31-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

What beauty I find in this~

Simply marvelous~

Marie~
Safwan Arekat
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Claire..How I would love to to catch a thought in but a whisper. Yours comes pretty close .
Safwan

 
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