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Seymour Tabin
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          Chaos

Chaos comes with the dawn,
Bringing the light of morn.
The stars and moon have gone to sleep,

With my fantasies to keep.
And I awake new born.

Now chaos rules the day
And I am torn away.
To fill the needs of all that live.

With the real of take and give.
To store the hay away.

It is a tale of repeat
And is a lonely street.
A one on one that must be done.

This work beneath the sun,
This work that gives receipt.

But comes the time of rest
I do my very best
To sail the moon and stars again.

To pick up dreams, amen
And dream myself illusions guest.

Wherein the night does close the door
And chaos does withdraw,
I sail upon my phantom ship,

To anchor in a slip,
Of peace and pleasant dream once more.
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The word for this one is.....exquisite, Sy.
Meadowmuse
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Sy, I love the theme of this piece...and your presentation, with its well~placed breaks, shares the recurring thought throughout the day of one who welcomes the dreamlight. Beautiful writing.

Claire
Martie
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To anchor in a slip, Of peace--Your expression is so full and meaning so clear.  You write words of wonder--and do it so well.
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy,
I,too, do the same as you, but could never express it as you do. This is exquisite.
Love ya
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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Balladeer,
Exquisite from you is rare, that you much.
Meadow,
A beautiful comment, thank you.
Martie,
Nery nice comment, thank you Martie. *L*
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Those dreams are the best, aren't they?!

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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Elizabeth,
I think it's a universal thing, love ya back
Sy
Denise,
Yes they are, *L* Sy
RobertB
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8 posted 01-30-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

keep dreamin' Seymour!!! I am right behind you.

Robert
Seymour Tabin
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Robert,
I will, thanks for the read.
RainbowGirl
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Sy: Where would we be without our dreams..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 01-31-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rainbow,
Your rainbow comments are beautiful.
Nan
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I don't know about "exquisite"... how bout splendiferous???
 
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