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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
I feel as lively As a kid. She says she likes Some stuff I did. I feel as spry As I can be. She likes to spend Her time with me. It's hard to keep Feet on the ground. It seems she likes To have me 'round. I will not add A final verse. To say too much Might turn out worse. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is so lovely Ted. I enjoyed it a lot : ) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis such a great Relief indeed.. Some simple thought's Just what I need For all that time On mine I spent, My poor brain now Is really bent. For reading mine I thank you Ted, But I'm enjoying Yours instead!! |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
To Nan: But mine just came Without no pain. I didn't need To wrack my brain. But your verse was So cataleptic, I feel I need An anesthetic. I guess I'll get A dictionary, And prove I too Can be so very . . . |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good thoughts, Ted..and so true that too much said can be harmful...knowing when to stop...now there's the key. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Short and simple is usually best!! I love this Ted! Denise |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
I'm simple, so it works best if I write simple. Like they say, deep down I'm shallow. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ted - lol@deep down 'Deer - lol at your hints... how's the new Baby doing? Are you keeping her in the garage? |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Hey, forget about Balladeer's gas-run baby, Long John, ask about *my* milk-run model! It's *my* poem, ain't it! |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
. . . and I sure as heck don't keep *mine* in the garage!!! |
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