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Colourless!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 01-30-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


Colourless


Shadow's of
Midnight blue
Surround my
Somber heart

With little light
It strains to see,
It's dreamboat
Sail from 'thee.

Waves of emotions
Flowing into
Black and white
Passionate oceans

Drowning within
The depths of a
Colourless, lifeless
Life!


Dark Angel.


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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1 posted 01-30-2000 06:35 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

Like a dream...well, some people's dreams, anyway...all in black and white!
Great use of imagery here, Dark Angel!

An altogether great poem.  

Little Spyro T. Dragon
Munda
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2 posted 01-30-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is like a "silent cry" DA. Great poem  
Dark Angel
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Little Spyro, thank you for your lovely comment!!  
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Munda,thank you!! silent indeed!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




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Gene
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4 posted 01-30-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

"lifeless life" -- I like the psychology.
Very nice. ~Gene
Denise
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5 posted 01-30-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! This is wonderful, Dark Angel!
Sad yet beautiful!    

Denise
sirreen
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6 posted 01-30-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for sirreen   Email sirreen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sirreen

Black and blue, the colors of suffering.
Thanks for the read.

sirreen
Pepper
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I really like the first stanza Dark Angel....it says so much and with beautful imagery...
Sad and beautifully written
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8 posted 01-30-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dark Angel-
This summons some pretty vivid images.
Nicely done.
~*Marge*~



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Poet deVine
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9 posted 01-30-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hey! I like this!! Good job!  
tracie66
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10 posted 01-30-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dark Angel, very deep....I like it  Tracie  
WhtDove
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11 posted 01-30-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey Angel....colorless life?  I don't think you have one of those....so WAKE UP!!!  I think you are having a bad dream..hehe

HUGS....
Moonshine
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12 posted 01-31-2000 03:32 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

DA this is beautiful sadness - very beautiful, well written work but very sad. Please call me if you need to talk : ) I'm always here for you.......hope that you're OK *worried*
 
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