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To live without you

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amber
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0 posted 01-30-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


"To Live Without You"


To live without you I must,
Leave myself somewhere,
Unguarded and defensless,
Agianst all that I fear.

To leave behind your eyes,
Is to let go of the memories,
That live inside your smile,
Portraying everything I need.

To say goodbye to the moonlight,
That grazed down upon my soul,
The instant I fell in love with you,
Knowing everything I need to know.

To go back back on all the promises,
That have held my life together,
"I'll never leave your side,"
"We'll always be together."

I could never live without you,
My life is where you are,
The dreams and aspirations,
Built on falling stars.

Without you I am no one,
That I would rather be,
My future would stand frozen,
Without you here with me.

To live without you, I could not,
Bear to take the pain,
We have lost each other once before,
And I promise love, "never agian."



 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 01-30-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Amber - this is a wonderful poem, you are very talented!  I know I am going to enjoy more of your work ............ Roniece.....
dash rendor
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2 posted 01-30-2000 05:19 AM       View Profile for dash rendor   Email dash rendor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dash rendor

Very touching Amber.  You have added a true taste of reality to letting go of a loved one.  Your poem feels both tragic and beautiful at the same time.  Bravo.
HelmutB
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3 posted 01-30-2000 08:51 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Amber this is so beautiful and heartfelt
Very good in writing and expression
Now just make sure you do hold on, both that is. Very nice


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Buffpimp
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4 posted 01-30-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

Hello Amber,
   This is a very warm and emotional work.  All I can really offer you is a tip:
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Gene
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5 posted 01-30-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Whew,  If only my old girlfriend had told me something this beautiful--I would have definitely gone back.

Beautifully said. ~Gene
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6 posted 01-30-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautifully romantic, Amber! Very well done!

Denise
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7 posted 01-30-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Amber, such devotion wrapped up in beautiful words of love! -SEA
amber
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8 posted 01-31-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

I want you all to know that I am truly touched that you could take the time to read and really understand what my poems are about and where i am coming from. You dont find that kind of understanding with many poeple and i feel so lucky to have found it here. Thank you.

 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


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