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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 01-30-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

WHEN NEXT.....

When next can I have your strong arms around me
And feel the touch of your soft hands over my body

When next can I taste again the sweetness of your tender kisses
And see your smile and look for the lust in your deep brown eyes

When next can I hear your sexy voice whisper sweet nothings in my ear

When

Let it be soon

I want you.....
© Copyright 2000 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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1 posted 01-30-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

Well...I don't have a sexy voice, but I know how to say a lot of nothing! Heck, I do it all the time in every poem I write (except for when I'm welcoming people--that's different)...lol  

Great piece!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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2 posted 01-30-2000 03:19 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Ah, I know that feeling well... tender, yearning poem.



 ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG


kaleidoscope
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3 posted 01-30-2000 03:22 AM       View Profile for kaleidoscope   Email kaleidoscope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaleidoscope

Soft, sad, aching poem.  I like it a lot.


simplyYRREHS
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4 posted 01-30-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

I agree with Kaleidoscope on the "aching" thing...expressed the want perfectly.  Good job!
Gene
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5 posted 01-30-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Woohoo, I have brown eyes.  

Very nice--short, but sweet.

~Gene
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6 posted 01-30-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderful Roniece! So romantic and full of yearning!!

Denise
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Yes, the longing in this is palpable...
Very nice piece Roniece...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Roniece, this is beautiful....
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9 posted 01-30-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Roniece, I say that to my husband every day! I miss him when he is away from me. I loved your poem! -SEA
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