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0 posted 01-30-2000 12:04 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Dear Daddy
so big and strong
you always taught me
right from wrong

Slapped my hand
when I was bad
cheered me up
when I felt sad

Helped me through
my "rotten years"
and when I cried
wiped away the tears

I may be grown
and now a wife
but I'll be your little girl
all my life.
-SEA-

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1 posted 01-30-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Smore   Email Smore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Smore

thats so sweet, what else can I say.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.
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2 posted 01-30-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Awww... (sniff... sniff)You're so sweet!
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3 posted 01-30-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Smore..thank you!

Master....thank you. My daddy is my hero!
-SEA-
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4 posted 01-30-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ah, this is so sweet, SEA! If you haven't given it to him yet this would make a great Father's day present!!  

Denise
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5 posted 01-30-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Denise, your praise is kind. My Dad knows....I tell him all the time! He is a great man.-SEA
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SEA-
Very sweet.
How 'bout a Valentine gift?
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 01-30-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

As for me, I'm still growing up, so I'm still in close proximity with my dad...this poem made me thankful for that.  

Excellent poem, SEA!  

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8 posted 01-30-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Little Spyro, glad to see someone so young( not a slam) writting! I started at 14. Tell your Dad often that you love him,Mom too. They need to hear it..... for the days when you are far away. The time at home goes by so fast....  -SEA
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9 posted 01-30-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for d.schultz   Email d.schultz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for d.schultz

I sent this to my dad... and I will call him tomorrow and tell him to forget about the money he owes me for winning all of the football games    thanks. ds
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10 posted 01-30-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

d.schultz, I'm so glad you sent this to your Dad!!! No higher praise than that! Glad you liked it! -SEA
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11 posted 01-31-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Sea all daddy's should be remembered in this way, I'm so lucky as well to have a dad who loves me to the end of the earth...Tracie
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12 posted 01-31-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

You use such sweet words.

Wonderful poem
mariee66
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13 posted 01-31-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

I have no memories of my father~
Reading your poem makes me wish I did~
Very touching, SEA~

Marie~
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Too True, Too True!  I'll be the first to admit I'm a daddy's girl...and very proud.  Love this poem, SEA!
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15 posted 01-31-2000 04:58 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is so nice!  Since I have a daughter that lights up the world for me, I can tell you what a joy it is to have a loving daughter.  and yes, she will always by my "littel girl".
Danny
 
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