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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-30 12:04 PM



Dear Daddy
so big and strong
you always taught me
right from wrong

Slapped my hand
when I was bad
cheered me up
when I felt sad

Helped me through
my "rotten years"
and when I cried
wiped away the tears

I may be grown
and now a wife
but I'll be your little girl
all my life.
-SEA-


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1 posted 2000-01-30 12:07 PM


thats so sweet, what else can I say.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

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2 posted 2000-01-30 12:08 PM


Awww... (sniff... sniff)You're so sweet!
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3 posted 2000-01-30 12:11 PM


Smore..thank you!

Master....thank you. My daddy is my hero!
-SEA-

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4 posted 2000-01-30 12:20 PM


Ah, this is so sweet, SEA! If you haven't given it to him yet this would make a great Father's day present!!  

Denise

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5 posted 2000-01-30 12:25 PM


Denise, your praise is kind. My Dad knows....I tell him all the time! He is a great man.-SEA
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6 posted 2000-01-30 12:25 PM


SEA-
Very sweet.
How 'bout a Valentine gift?
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2000-01-30 12:29 PM


As for me, I'm still growing up, so I'm still in close proximity with my dad...this poem made me thankful for that.  

Excellent poem, SEA!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon

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8 posted 2000-01-30 12:35 PM


Little Spyro, glad to see someone so young( not a slam) writting! I started at 14. Tell your Dad often that you love him,Mom too. They need to hear it..... for the days when you are far away. The time at home goes by so fast....  -SEA
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9 posted 2000-01-30 12:49 PM


I sent this to my dad... and I will call him tomorrow and tell him to forget about the money he owes me for winning all of the football games    thanks. ds
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10 posted 2000-01-30 12:55 PM


d.schultz, I'm so glad you sent this to your Dad!!! No higher praise than that! Glad you liked it! -SEA
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11 posted 2000-01-31 08:27 AM


Dear Sea all daddy's should be remembered in this way, I'm so lucky as well to have a dad who loves me to the end of the earth...Tracie
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12 posted 2000-01-31 03:08 PM


You use such sweet words.

Wonderful poem

mariee66
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13 posted 2000-01-31 04:27 PM


I have no memories of my father~
Reading your poem makes me wish I did~
Very touching, SEA~

Marie~

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14 posted 2000-01-31 04:48 PM


Too True, Too True!  I'll be the first to admit I'm a daddy's girl...and very proud.  Love this poem, SEA!
Danny Holloway
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15 posted 2000-01-31 04:58 PM


This is so nice!  Since I have a daughter that lights up the world for me, I can tell you what a joy it is to have a loving daughter.  and yes, she will always by my "littel girl".
Danny

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