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Smore
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Thoughts of you run through my mind
Leaving everything else behind

I imagine you stay with me through the day
Just looking at each other, theres nothing to say

You kissed me so sweet and looked in my eyes
Whispered words of forever and promised no lies

You then took my hand and you led the way
You said,"Come with me I have something to say."

You whispered "I love you," and then stroked my
face
But then I awoke and of you I saw no trace

My heart yearns so much for you
Perhaps someday yours will too.


 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.
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Smore, this is so tender and sweet. I have felt that way too. I think lots of us here can relate. Beautiful! -SEA
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This is both sad and beautiful. Well done, Smore! Very lovely!

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Smore-
Lovely.  Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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