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d.schultz
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0 posted 2000-01-29 10:27 PM


Come to me in a night's dream, Come and take me to that magical place you call heaven.  Let me see the stars that will wrap me up with your heat of passion in the night... Come to me and call out my name and my ship will meet yours under the stary night.... Come into me and warm my body with your sweet tender juices that flow all through the sky and scream through the night..... Hear the roar of the thunder of your back hiked up thrusting into me for the world to see...... Come to me in a night's dream where reality will stand the test of time, time still for the world to see....


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-29 10:36 PM


This is beautiful, D! Very lovely!

Denise

d.schultz
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2 posted 2000-01-30 10:03 AM


Thanks D!  First time I have written like this and wasn't sure it should go in here but had fun writing it and just wanted to share    thanks again...... ds
Laurel
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3 posted 2000-02-04 01:11 PM


I think this is a very romantic love poem!
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
4 posted 2000-02-04 01:21 PM


Wow ... I went and got my wife to read this poem and ...
BRB

Wow!

Rex}<{{{{o>

spiked
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5 posted 2000-02-04 01:31 PM


very passionate.
Does the body gooood.
Rich

d.schultz
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6 posted 2000-02-04 05:00 PM


Thank you all who responded........
Rex: I hope your wife enjoyed very much  
Spiked: yes it does the body good.. thanks  
Laurel.... Thanks a bunch

Again.. thanks to all, it was my first attempt.. and I had fun!  

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