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Constant is the Moon
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Constant is the Moon |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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The moon, among other things, will always be there- So bright, so beautiful, to be seen everywhere. Something to look up to, day in and day out- To stare at, wondering... what it's all about. To love, to comfort, till the end of my days- To pray to, confide in, whenever I'm in need. Seeing it, so fragile, just coasting through the stars, I look up at your brightness, so close, yet so very far. Will you be here tomorrow- to ease my distorted nerves- to send me off to dreamland, with your silent words? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful, so very beautiful Devina...  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Constants and Symmetry...two of my absolute favorties. If only the world were composed entirely of such perfections! Liked this one very much!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Devina! Very lovely! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Devina I liked this very much! A calming affect!  Thanks. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina- I just love anything connected to the moon. Beautiful- beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the title and I love your moon "coasting through the stars". what a lovely picture! LIz |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Beautiful piece!!!! I haven't seen very many poems around here written about the moon...I think it's about time someone addressed the ancient orb that has been drifting serenely through the black, star-specked pool we call space. Again, wonderful poem! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
You sure know how to paint the stars So very enchanting, wanting, seeking A true "Devina" I love it Here is a hug for yah "HUG" The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Buffpimp Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 39 |
This poem is very good. Can u teach me how to perfect my similies and my consistency? Well good work and I hope you keep it up. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thank you all, the moon is full of romance, among other things!!! And Helmut- a hug from you is always much needed!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Contemplation..always inspiring..and comforting. Beautiful poem. Safwan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thank you dear, and welcome to passions!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina, all my life I have looked at the moon with a special kind of wonder, especially when it's full. Pulls at me, comforts me somehow...... I loved your poem. -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Devina~ Even your name sounds divine  )~Your poem was lovely... makes me want to gaze into the night sky~ Marie~ |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
I chanced to looked into your eyes today, And I saw the Moon. I'm a lot better person for doing so, Thanks to you! You've touched my heart... With a kiss and butterfly beauty, I wipe this tear. Paul |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Devina the title was what drew me...and the rest wasn't a let down....lovely poem. I love poems about the moon or stars... Tracie |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hey there!!! Devina, I see with this, that you shine just as brightly as the moon itself!!! "Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll be among the stars." Unknown |
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