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Shutting out "forever more"

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devina
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0 posted 01-29-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


You plagurize my thoughts
without saying a word.
The color in your eyes
change to set the mood.

You have me weakened
by all that you "don't" do.
I now watch what I say,
nothing I'm not suppose to.

You anger in a minutes time
how did you get so rude?
You give me this nonchalant-
"you're not important" attitude.

Go ahead- deny me all,
I'll try for you no more-
But don't forsake me long...
All my weight is pressed
against this door-
Shutting out "forever more"


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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1 posted 01-29-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'd say keep that door shut.....(voice of experience) Save yourself the agony of divorce.....

Denise
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2 posted 01-29-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thanks Denise, it seems like divorce- after four years of engagement!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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3 posted 01-30-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I know.....it's very painful.....been there too (I'm so pathetic!).....but it is much cheaper than an actual divorce...LOL (well, at least I can laugh about it now!!! )

Denise
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4 posted 01-30-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina-
Listen to what Denise says.
No one should have to look into
smoldering eyes that terrorize.
No one should have to watch what
she says.
No one should have to confront
anger brewed in a moments time.
Read what you've written, honey.
See what we see.
Close the door for good.
There are those who are here for you.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 01-30-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Devina, girl, you can do better....and deserve it. Don't settle for less, ok?
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6 posted 01-30-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I'll help you hold the door.  
devina
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7 posted 01-30-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You guys are all sooo sweet, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart!!!!! I'm trying my hardest to get through this, and with my "family" here, it helps alot!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (edited 01-30-2000).]
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8 posted 01-30-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Me2   Email Me2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Me2

By now you must realize that you've touched the hearts of others ... you did mine.  What an accomplishment in life!    

Your hurt is painful; it's meant to be ... for a reason. But it won't last forever.  
Let me know if I can help. You helped me.

Paul
your new friend  
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9 posted 01-30-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sadly I read what you have said
Don't let him take you down. It is so bad
There nicer gentleman out there
Just look at me or Balladeer
Me2 obviously would like to share

Michael forgive that I took the liberty to use your name, but you are a gentleman.
Not to leave anybody else out, you all are  

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10 posted 01-30-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for sirreen   Email sirreen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sirreen

While it may often seem so, not all us guys are total jerks.

sirreen

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Albert Einstein
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11 posted 01-30-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Helmut, you are the gentleman G* and I'm sure balladeer knows he's held in the utmost respect as well...you might have made him blush though Thank you my friend, can you stand one more hug???

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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12 posted 01-30-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Always

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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devina, you are such a wonderful sweet girl, don't take more then you have too. All that will happen is you'll say why did I wait so long. I went through a similar situation, I was afraid of speaking opening on most harmless topics because it would cause her to get upset... I'm a new man now, none of that, "I speak therefor I am". Be who you have to be let noone stand in your way. I wasted five recent years of my life, but I'm alot happier now.

Parker .... Hugs
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14 posted 01-30-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, he's right, Devina. There are many of us out here who would be tickled to find a woman with your character and beauty.  
devina
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15 posted 01-30-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Ok, ok- now I'M the one blushing, you guys are too much!!! Me thinks my heart will ALWAYS lie in Passions!!!

James- as always your opinion means so much, it takes a sweetheart to know a sweetheart!! Four years down and the rest of my life to go!!!

And Micheal, you know when to say the right thing at the right time, and ANY woman would be lucky to capture you!! Hugs to you friend!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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16 posted 01-31-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Devina, don't just put your weight behind that door, bolt it, lock it and run...........fast! Been there, you're lucky you didn't marry him. -SEA
 
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