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For All The Times........

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jascanvey
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0 posted 01-29-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jascanvey

For all the times you made me cry
For all the times I wondered why
For all the times you looked away
There was so much more left to say.

For all the times you cut me down
For all the times you made me frown
For all the times you left me alone
I waited all day by the phone.

For all the times you broke my heart
For all the times I fell apart
For all the times you pushed me out
I was left with all this doubt.

For all the times I couldn't sleep
For all the times my thoughts ran deep
For all the times you left me cold
It was only you I wanted to hold.

For all the times you held me near
For all the times I felt so dear
For all the times I wanted more
You left me feeling like a whore.

For all the times we could have talked
For all the times away you walked
For all the times you left me numb
How could I ever have been so dumb?

For all the times you were my friend
For all the times I was left to fend
For all the times you were so stern
And yet I find I still don't learn.

For all the times I gave up men
For all the times I took you back again
For all the times I took your side
What was the point, you only lied.

For all these times I gave you my best
And now I'm left with all this mess
Through all these times I needed your touch
But now I realise, I wanted too much.

© Copyright 2000 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-29-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Julie. Very pain filled poem. You have expressed it well. I look forward to more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
jascanvey
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since 12-26-1999
Posts 130
England


2 posted 01-29-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Denise, thanks, the card was fantastic!
There is so much more inside of me just waiting to spill out into the family!!
Denise
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3 posted 01-29-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great! You write it and I'll read it!!

Denise
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 01-29-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Hello and Welcome Julie  )) I enjoyed this poem of yours and look forward to reading more - I too,have only just found this site - I think it's a fantastic find  )) Keep smiling - Roniece  )
Laurel
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5 posted 02-04-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for Laurel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laurel

Sometimes love can break your heart. I like this one!
jascanvey
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6 posted 02-04-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Roniece - thanks for stopping by. I already feel at home here, I can't seem to stay away though.......not that I would want to!

Laurel - I'm working hard at not letting it break, keep your fingers crossed for me! Glad you liked it.
Poet deVine
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7 posted 02-04-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good poem..glad to see it brought to the top!  
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 02-05-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
SEA
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with you


9 posted 02-05-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Wow! I've been there. jeez.......you took me back to some painful memories.......excellent writting! Welcome home!-SEA
Gene
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10 posted 02-05-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

For all the times she made replies,
It's my turn to give jascanvey a mighty Hi.

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It was nice of you to reply 36 times before making your first post. This is a wonderful entrance into the forums.  

~Gene
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 02-05-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Jascanvey,
Welcome and I enjoyed the poem.
just_another_fe
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12 posted 02-05-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

THATS A GOOD POAM I FEEL LIKE YOUR TELLING MY STORY.
jascanvey
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Posts 130
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13 posted 02-05-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Poet de vine and Hoot owl I am honoured that you have read my poem.

Sea - I think you and I have a lot in common! I can relate to all of your poems I have read over the last week or so!

Gene and Seymour - thanks for the welcome, glad you liked it.

just another - I look forward to reading some of your poems. Welcome! Be warned - your telephone line will be constantly engaged now you have found this site!!
Gemini
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since 12-15-1999
Posts 1223
Wisconsin, USA


14 posted 02-05-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Very beautiful poem, I've been there too.  I'm first now beginning to find that I can't find someone else to define my happiness, I have to find my own first, its been a tough lesson.  Good luck to you and welcome.
jascanvey
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15 posted 02-05-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Thanks for the welcome and kind words Gemini.
 
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