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The Passionate Loss

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JOY 14
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0 posted 01-29-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

My first reaction was at first, shock.
Not believing what I heard
It couldn't be truth
Too horible

When I finaly realized what happened
I broke down
And cried
Until I thought I couldn't anymore
Then I cried some more

After the tears dried,
My anger arose
How could anyone do this to me?
How could anyone be so cruel?

When all emotions came to a stop
I stepped out of my nightmare of a day dream
My imagination getting the best of me
I breathed a sigh of relief

No one took away the thing
That means so very much to me
No one made me leave the place
That keeps my sane, alert, alive

Thank goodness it is still here
My family of friends all around
Here at this beautiful poetry haven...
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 Devotion

The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to the ocean-
Holding the curve of one position,
Counting an endless repetiton.

-Robert Frost

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Denise
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1 posted 01-29-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Losing this place would surely be a nightmare! Excellent poem, Joy!

Denise
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2 posted 01-30-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Joy, I don't think I could bear the loss of this place either. Well written about most everybody's emotions here at Passions.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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3 posted 01-30-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Don't worry....Passions will always be here...odd how we've all come here..depend on this place...NEED it...amazing!
SEA
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4 posted 01-30-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Joy 14, you hit the nail on the head! I too love coming here, this warm loveing circle of friends! -SEA
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