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Memories of you

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vandana
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0 posted 01-29-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Days went by,
The night came and went by,
Still I remember you,
The summer came ,
as the sun comes out,
I miss you so,
Your memories are on my mind,
The time isn't right yet,
Because your memories
make me cry at night,
Don't know
what will I do without you,
Now the winter is near,
And you are not here,
you're gone away from me,
God knows,
why I am still here,
Maybe god wants  me to stay,
and your memories keeps remminding me
of those good times
and bad times we had,
I am sad,
because christmas is on the way,
I will remember those times,
we spent together,
on the christmas days,
Memories of you,
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Koon
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1 posted 01-29-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

I guess it's true that one will miss someone most at christmas time....sad but lovely poem...

 Koon-
Pepper
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2 posted 01-29-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very sad and lovely Vandana
HelmutB
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3 posted 01-29-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sad it's true
well done the poem up there by you
Memories is all you linger with
But you do have memories and that is bliss
Sad would be if you had none





 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Mike
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4 posted 01-29-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Another good one Vandana... enjoyed.
Keep up the good work.
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 01-29-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Vandana,
Lovely poem and nicely written. They say, tis better to have loved, but sometimes that's hard to believe
Keep writing
Love
LIz
Denise
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6 posted 01-29-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Vandana, this is absolutely wonderful!! Well done!!

Denise
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