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A love poem

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Seymour Tabin
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           A love poem

She spun a web of golden balm,
Encircling me with naked charm.
And took my hand through fields of green,
My lonely heart had never seen.

Opened visions of intrusion,
Far beyond the cast illusion.
Held high a magic verse of light,
That lit the darkest of my night.

Bathed my soul in shards of rhyme,
Dissolved the very truth of time.
Opened a road to infinity,
That went beyond intimacy.

And I fell into the abyss,
On the echoes of my bliss.
And gave my earthly time away,
For here, I would forever stay.

I never knew what words could stir
Until I met the likes of her.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-29-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour-

This is indeed 'A Love Poem'
You melt my heart with your phrases.
WOW !  Just WOW !

Your words of love fall
like petals from the rose.
Embracing my heart
encircling me.

You weave magic.
~*Marge*~



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Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-29-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
She must be very eloquent for her words to have stirred the likes of you.
Very beautiful, as always
Love ya
Liz
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3 posted 01-29-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Simply beautiful. To say more is impossible!
HelmutB
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4 posted 01-29-2000 12:23 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

A true "Seymore" have we here
Speaking of love with joy and cheer
Words falling from is pen on to the paper
No wonder he is after her
Such Love displayed line by line
Well done there Seymore, very fine
Loved the read


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Pepper
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5 posted 01-29-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh Sy....you've got me 'sighing' again..This is sooo beautiful!
pigpen
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6 posted 01-29-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for pigpen   Email pigpen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pigpen

That was truly awesome.   I have a girl i feel the same way about and you summed it all with that poem.
Nate Dogg
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7 posted 01-29-2000 12:52 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wondeful poem, Sy.

 Nathan
Martie
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This is beautiful sy,
so pure and lovely thus,
that all that love, listen.
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 01-29-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"I never knew what words could stir
Until I met the likes of her."

Words can enslave even the most haunted heart.

Beautiful writing, Sy.
Claire
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10 posted 01-29-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Bravo! I couldn't have said it better myself. I only wish that I could write love poems again. Who knows, maybe one day I will. Well done, thank you for sharing this.

G

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Rather that which you haven't

Little_Spyro
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11 posted 01-29-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

...uh...WOW!

If I could write stuff like this, I could probably be one of the best poets at Passions!
Incredible piece, Seymour!
devina
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12 posted 01-29-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

The last line says it all Sy, you're a wonder, ya know???

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Simply beautiful, Seymour!

Denise
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And a beautiful love poem it is   Outstanding Sy !
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 01-29-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I do like these words - you express them well ..... Roniece .....
Alwye
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Wow, Sy...incredible.  So lovely this is..I enjoyed it a lot.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 01-30-2000 10:02 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To all the above, I am overwhelmed by the response to this poem. I can only offer my
humble thanks and say I love you all. Sy
Buffpimp
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18 posted 01-30-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

This poem honestly touched me.  This is very good.  a love poem indeed is what this is
Patrick
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 01-30-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Patrick,
Very nice comment, thank you.
Beri
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Beautiful words written to form a beautiful poem, Seymour.  Definitely one of love!  Its exquisite!  Thanks for such a lovely read.

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jaxjoy
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21 posted 01-30-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Isn't it wonderful how love stirs so many words and feelings within us? wow...great piece.  
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Sy, what a sweet tribute to your love. Made me smile. -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 01-31-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Beri, Thanks for the beautiful comment.

Jayjoy, Yes it is and thank you.

Sea, Your welcome to the smile, thanks.
Koon
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24 posted 01-31-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

Wow!!! You've got to teach me how to write like that! I can never write like that....Great poem anyway.

 Koon-
 
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