If... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

0 posted 2000-01-29 11:09 AM

                      If,
             I could take your hand
           and become a friend to care,
                   I would,

                      If,
             I could touch your scars
              and make them disappear
                   I would,

                      If,
             I could kiss your cheek
           and make bad memories vanish,
                   I would,

                      If,
             I could kiss your lips
           and bring Love to your life,
                   I would,

                      If,
            I could hold you in my arms
           and promise joy to your heart,
                   I would,

                      If,
             I could embrace your soul
           and bring peace to your spirit,
                   I would,

                      If.....

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

1 posted 2000-01-29 11:15 AM

Filled with longing I could feel...this is lovely Danny...

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2000-01-29 11:17 AM

Danny,
A very ify poem, but I enjoyed.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-29 11:29 AM

This is lovely, Danny. I enjoyed this very much!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-01-29 11:30 AM

Danny,
This poem is absolutely beautiful. I sense a lot of feelings of helplessness in this piece and I understand exactly how you feel. It's hard to watch people suffer and not be able to do anything to help. Sometimes though, just a kind word goes a long way in easing the hurt, helping scars to heal and sometimes no matter how many if's we have, how much we want to do, nothing we can do can help anyway, it's just something they have to get through on their own. This is a wonderfully written poem in any aspect you choose to see it from and I think the person it's written for is very lucky to be thought of so caringly.
Ruth

I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-01-29 11:51 AM

Danny-

If ...
I could say this is lovely,
I would.

It is ...
and I do.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-01-29 12:35 PM

Thanks to all for your kind responses, especially yours hoot_owl. And Marge,
nicely put!
Danny

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.