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Safwan Arekat
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Bahrain


0 posted 01-29-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat



Writes the Poet

A luminous thought
in a pure heart

that is all you are


A resonance sought
and a lure wrought

to light my mindís flare


Innocence caught
and nearer brought

from a distance, from afar


and essence come in bout
through a doorís route

one was left ajar


In brilliance and light
to pour upon light

blazing burns my heart


and essence bright
to peer at, my sight


The Poet starts to write


Safwan Arekat



http://magicboat.com




[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 01-29-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Captivating, Safwan, from the title to the ending line. One can sense the timing in your words and verse. Very lovely.

Dear LadyClaire

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-29-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Safwan-
What a lovely thought you've written of.
Wonderful and welcome to Passion's.
I went to your homepage ...
a 'magic boat' indeed.
Hope to see more of your work shared here.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 01-29-2000 12:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very beautiful
I was diappointed that I couldn't open your home page.
Liz
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 01-29-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow, this is a very deep poem. Welcome to Passions!

 Nathan
Safwan Arekat
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5 posted 01-29-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat

Thanks Everyone,

Happy to be here

Safwan
Denise
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This is beautiful, Safwan! Very lovely!

Denise
 
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