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Safwan Arekat
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 38
Bahrain

0 posted 2000-01-29 11:06 AM




Writes the Poet

A luminous thought
in a pure heart

that is all you are


A resonance sought
and a lure wrought

to light my mind’s flare


Innocence caught
and nearer brought

from a distance, from afar


and essence come in bout
through a door’s route

one was left ajar


In brilliance and light
to pour upon light

blazing burns my heart


and essence bright
to peer at, my sight


The Poet starts to write


Safwan Arekat



http://magicboat.com




[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).]

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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

1 posted 2000-01-29 11:19 AM


Captivating, Safwan, from the title to the ending line. One can sense the timing in your words and verse. Very lovely.

Dear LadyClaire


Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-01-29 11:24 AM


Safwan-
What a lovely thought you've written of.
Wonderful and welcome to Passion's.
I went to your homepage ...
a 'magic boat' indeed.
Hope to see more of your work shared here.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-01-29 12:04 PM


Very beautiful
I was diappointed that I couldn't open your home page.
Liz

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2000-01-29 01:07 PM


Wow, this is a very deep poem. Welcome to Passions!

 Nathan

Safwan Arekat
Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38
Bahrain
5 posted 2000-01-29 08:03 PM


Thanks Everyone,

Happy to be here

Safwan

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-29 10:46 PM


This is beautiful, Safwan! Very lovely!

Denise

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