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Truth

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Koon
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Singapore


0 posted 01-29-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

Man stumble upon it
But pick themselves up and run.
They dismiss this ****
Thinking they could have much more fun.

They regard a fake
As the divine truth itself.
God himself cannot forsake
Those that cannot save oneself.

Truth hurts like a piercing knife
Killing those that refuse to believe.
Yet it stands harder than rock, longer than life
Saving those that believe for they can achieve.

May you search for the truth in you
Before truth comes to search the fake of you.


 Koon-
© Copyright 2000 Lee Chee Koon - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 01-29-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

A profound message indeed!
Good writing,
DH
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-29-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lee Chee-
What truths are writ
within these lines.
Wonderful ...
just wonderful.

Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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Koon
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3 posted 01-30-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

All I can say is thank you for reading this lil' poem of mine.

 Koon-
Buffpimp
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4 posted 01-30-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

Once again Koon, I am deeply mezmerized by your array of talent in poetry.  I hope one day that I can write like this.  I am still trying.  Loved the sonnet by the way
Patrick
JOY 14
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5 posted 01-30-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Yes, very profound!  Can't wait to read more from you, Koon.
Koon
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6 posted 01-31-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

Thanx for the support guys!! I wonder if I can keep up with you guys.  

 Koon-
 
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