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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 01-29-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

I'll never leave your side I said,
And wiped tears from your eyes,
Your everything I will ever need,
So stay with me tonight.

Hold me gently here with you,
And kiss away my doubts,
Forget goodbyes, and tommorows fears,
Focus on what our love is about.

Surviving all the hard times,
That we never thought would come,
To find each others arms agian,
Proving the strength of our love.

Let these tears fall on your chest,
As my eyes fall deep in slumber,
I cherish you more than anything,
And love you like no other.

I cant ask you to change your life,
For I know it isnt fair,
To plead with you to walk with me,
And leave the past lying here.

You hush my words so silently,
WIth just one heartfelt glance,
Staring into my eyes you say,
"You never even had to ask."

 Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always


© Copyright 2000 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
lucky
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1 posted 01-29-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

As always Amber,

Your reads are ever gripping. And now a word from the "King"

Now if your baby leaves you and you have a tale to tell just take a walk down o’l lonely street to heart break hotel.
Although it’s always crowded you still can find some room for broken hearted lovers to cry away their gloom.
The bellhop’s tears keep flowing the deskclerk’s dressed in black they’ve been so long on lonely street they’re never coming back.

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 01-29-2000).]
Denise
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2 posted 01-29-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and touching, Amber! Very lovely!

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 01-29-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Amber,
a very warm and heart felt poem, enjoyed the read.
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
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4 posted 01-29-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Touching, heartfelt all of the above
Your poem so sadly speaks of love
Written with a heart so soft
Lited my heart out and aloft
It's now hanging there and I have to breathe
Without my heart I cannot find release
So I read your poem oncemore
My heart came back down onto the floor
Very nice and beautiful Amber



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Danny Holloway
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5 posted 01-29-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nicely written!
DH
amber
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los banos, ca,


6 posted 01-29-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you so much for your reply, i appreciate your love of my poetry. I miss you all so much sorry i havent had that much time, but i will be back soon to  read all of your work. Thanks so much!
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7 posted 01-30-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Amber, I enjoy reading your poetry. You write so lovely. I look forward to reading more!   -SEA
devina
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since 10-28-1999
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8 posted 01-30-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Just lovely sis, keep this up and your gonna have a book on that boy!!

Love ya ams, your sister


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Beri
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9 posted 01-30-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Beautiful Amber...  I loved this.  But then again I tend to know that I will love many of your pieces.  Great job!  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

 
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