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Safwan Arekat
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Bahrain


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Angel


The sight of Angel makes me sigh
a breath of life I canít say why
So sweet and soft and lofty high
is the sight of Angel in my eye

Is it mere chance or destined fate
my eyes to glimpse a damsel great
not an evel witch, nor the devils bait
but an Angel sent through heavenís gate

So let me sit and gaze at you
the sweetest sweet I ever knew
the one and only Angel who
can touch my heart the way you do




[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).]
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-29-2000 05:34 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Must be a lovely angel to be deserving of such a lovely poem. Welcome to Passions, with poetry like this, you fit right in.
Liz
JamesMichael
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2 posted 01-29-2000 05:44 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Safwan this seems like my kind of angel..are there more angels available as lovely as her...if so please...send me an angel..right now....I appreciate this poem.    James
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 01-29-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow, your words are so beautiful that they remind of another poet on this board. Can you guess who?

 Nathan
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 01-29-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Hallmark will want this poem for a card!
Well written
DH
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 01-30-2000 04:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Safwan-
The loveliest thing I've read tonight ..
well, this morning really.
I'm on a marathon reading session.
Very, very pretty verse.
~*Marge*~
Denise
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Another beautiful poem, Safwan!! Very lovely!

Denise
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7 posted 01-30-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Safwan, my daughter's nickname is Angel. I loved this! -SEA
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 01-30-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Your words speak so well of timeless love...your heart must have written this poem, Safwan.

Claire
Safwan Arekat
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9 posted 01-31-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat

Much thanks to all for this warm welcome.

Let me share with you the poem in its original wording. It was only the thought of her that was angelic.


Cacey


The sight of Cacey makes me sigh
a breath of life I canít say why
So sweet and soft and lofty high
is the sight of Cacey in my eye

Is it mere chance or destined fate
my eyes to glimpse a damsel great
not an evel witch, nor the devils bait
but an angel sent through heavenís gate

So let me sit and gaze at you
the sweetest sweet I ever knew
the one and only Cacey who
can touch my heart the way you do

Safwan Arekat
THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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the poem in its original wording is nicer
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