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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Angel The sight of Angel makes me sigh a breath of life I can’t say why So sweet and soft and lofty high is the sight of Angel in my eye Is it mere chance or destined fate my eyes to glimpse a damsel great not an evel witch, nor the devils bait but an Angel sent through heaven’s gate So let me sit and gaze at you the sweetest sweet I ever knew the one and only Angel who can touch my heart the way you do [This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Must be a lovely angel to be deserving of such a lovely poem. Welcome to Passions, with poetry like this, you fit right in. Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Safwan this seems like my kind of angel..are there more angels available as lovely as her...if so please...send me an angel..right now....I appreciate this poem. James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, your words are so beautiful that they remind of another poet on this board. Can you guess who? Nathan |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hallmark will want this poem for a card! Well written DH |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Safwan- The loveliest thing I've read tonight .. well, this morning really. I'm on a marathon reading session. Very, very pretty verse. ~*Marge*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautiful poem, Safwan!! Very lovely! Denise |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Safwan, my daughter's nickname is Angel. I loved this! -SEA |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your words speak so well of timeless love...your heart must have written this poem, Safwan. Claire |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Much thanks to all for this warm welcome. Let me share with you the poem in its original wording. It was only the thought of her that was angelic. Cacey The sight of Cacey makes me sigh a breath of life I can’t say why So sweet and soft and lofty high is the sight of Cacey in my eye Is it mere chance or destined fate my eyes to glimpse a damsel great not an evel witch, nor the devils bait but an angel sent through heaven’s gate So let me sit and gaze at you the sweetest sweet I ever knew the one and only Cacey who can touch my heart the way you do Safwan Arekat |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
the poem in its original wording is nicer |
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