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Safwan Arekat
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                    Sweet


    She is sweeet       the sweetest sweet
    fit for a pot of      the purest treat

    Cute is her face      it makes me daze
    soft is her heart  in passion and heat

    Her way of dress       is high finesse
    with rosy scent        and makeup neat

    Bold is her tongue    to lash and stun
    fast is her wit     that canít be beat

    Strong is her will     with noble aims
    and in retreat       thereís no defeat

    These are traits    I judged from afar
    What will I say         if I ever meet?





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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-29-2000 05:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

She sounds perfect to me.
And she gets a sweet poem.
Why don't you give it to her?
Liz
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2 posted 01-29-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Safwan! This is a lovely poem! Appropriately titled!! Please check you email for a special welcome!

Denise
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3 posted 01-29-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is lovely and I agree with Liz....I think you should give the lucky lady your poem  
Welcome to Passions....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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4 posted 01-29-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Safwan-
Say it just like this !
Perfect.
~*Marge*~


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simplyYRREHS
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5 posted 01-29-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

OH, how I wish to be someone's inspiration for writing such a lovely piece!  Loved this one!  Welcome to Passions.


Sherry

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau

Martie
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6 posted 01-29-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sweet and tender poem that tells your feelings.  Enjoyed, and welcome!
Safwan Arekat
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7 posted 01-29-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat

Thank you all !!  

Your words are so uplifting.

Oh...  I did meet her...

She is a Movie Star ...See..

And She was Sweet..

Safwan



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THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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8 posted 12-03-2003 05:53 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

pojah paht again right
 
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