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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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One More Time ~Marge Tindal~ Let me love you one more time till all the days are night Hold me until the dawn is breaking over the meadow bright ~ Revel in this love nest made with you in mind Darling let me love you one more time ~ Each day getting closer to the end of love we share Let me love you one more time then please go before I dare Dare to keep you forever locked within these arms darling let me love you one more time so you will know I care ~ Perhaps you will remember when you are gone so far away the love that waits for you here forever and a day ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I really enjoyed this poem -- and wow, is February 14th so close so soon! I especially like the unintended effect of the last two stanzas, which look like hearts. Mike |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, fine. A heart and a wineglass.  Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks Mike - and 'here's lifting that fine heart-shaped wine glass to you'... but straight from the heart ! I'm glad you liked it and yes, that romantic day is coming. The hearts will open and the loving thoughts will flow to the pages for us all to see. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You know somethin' your stuff is gettin' prettier by the minute. i love the shape not to mention your projections. My Prayers, Lucky |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful love poem, Marge From a beautiful heart Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem and formatting, Marge! To me it looked like two hearts with an arrow through it...I guess we all see things differently! Whatever your intentions, I know it was intended! (hehe...did that make any sense?!) Denise |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is lovely, Marge! A tender poem in wonderful shapes. My, how I enjoy your work! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
So there is a nice piece of poetry and art combined So beautifully constructed and intwined I wonder who that gentleman might be For whom she fill the glass weheh I no for it ain't me (bummer) A nice and lovely poem Marge When are you going to stop out doing yourself The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky- The fact that you found it so lovely makes my heart smile. Elizabeth, my friend- Thank you, love. Denise- I think your eyes saw what my heart tried to 'intentionally' pen. Thanks for being you. Rosemary- Coming from the lady who is the artiste extraordinare ... I am elated. A hug for you. Helmut, my friend- Ahhhh ! Thank you dear one. I would fill the glass if you would but drink the heady wine of love. The heart with loving thoughts of you is already filled. You romantic, you ! Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Back to the top, is where this belongs Such beautiful words, feelings so strong. Danny |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This poem is so beautiful, Marge! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny- Thank you so much. Sincerity from the heart is my speciality. Nate- You have a tender heart. So glad you found it beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sigh! Lovely, beautiful words Marge. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I loved this poem very much!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful! what a format! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge Sweetie, this is one sweet read my friend... Hugs2u *~coco*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Getting around to thanking you for remembering the oldies~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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