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One More Time

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Marge Tindal
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One More Time
~Marge Tindal~

Let me love you
one more time
till all the days are night
Hold me until the dawn is breaking
over the meadow bright
~
Revel in this
love nest
made
with
you
in mind
Darling
let me love you
one more time
~
Each day getting closer
to the end of love we share
Let me love you one more time
then please go before I dare
Dare  to keep you  forever
locked within these arms
darling let me love you
one more time so
you will know
I care
~
Perhaps you will
remember when you
are gone so far away
the love that waits
for you here
forever
and
a
day
~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-29-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I really enjoyed this poem -- and wow, is February 14th so close so soon! I especially like the unintended effect of the last two stanzas, which look like hearts.

Mike
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Okay, fine. A heart and a wineglass.  

Mike
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 01-29-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Thanks Mike -
and 'here's lifting that
fine heart-shaped
wine glass to you'...
but straight from the heart !

I'm glad you liked it and
yes, that romantic day is coming.
The hearts will open and the loving
thoughts will flow to the pages for
us all to see.
~Marge~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 01-29-2000 05:03 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

You know somethin'

  your stuff is gettin' prettier by the minute. i love the shape not to mention your projections.

My Prayers, Lucky

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5 posted 01-29-2000 05:30 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful love poem, Marge
From a beautiful heart
Liz
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6 posted 01-29-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem and formatting, Marge! To me it looked like two hearts with an arrow through it...I guess we all see things differently! Whatever your intentions, I know it was intended! (hehe...did that make any sense?!)

Denise
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This is lovely, Marge!  A tender poem in wonderful shapes.  My, how I enjoy your work!
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8 posted 01-29-2000 11:06 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

So there is a nice piece of poetry and art combined
So beautifully constructed and intwined
I wonder who that gentleman might be
For whom she fill the glass weheh
I no for it ain't me (bummer)  
A nice and lovely poem Marge
When are you going to stop out doing yourself  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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9 posted 01-29-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky-
The fact that you found it so lovely
makes my heart smile.

Elizabeth, my friend-
Thank you, love.

Denise-
I think your eyes saw what my heart
tried to 'intentionally' pen.
Thanks for being you.

Rosemary-
Coming from the lady who is the
artiste extraordinare ...
I am elated.  A hug for you.

Helmut, my friend-

Ahhhh !  Thank you dear one.
I would fill the glass
if you would but drink
the heady wine of love.
The heart with loving
thoughts of you is already filled.

You romantic, you !
Love ~*Marge*~





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10 posted 01-29-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Back to the top, is where this belongs
Such beautiful words, feelings so strong.
Danny
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This poem is so beautiful, Marge!

 Nathan
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Danny-
Thank you so much.
Sincerity from the heart
is my speciality.

Nate-
You have a tender heart.
So glad you found it beautiful.
~*Marge*~





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noles1@totcon.com

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Sigh!  Lovely, beautiful words Marge.
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14 posted 06-24-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I loved this poem very much!!
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this is beautiful! what a format!
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Marge Sweetie, this is one sweet read my friend...
Hugs2u
*~coco*~
Marge Tindal
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17 posted 01-02-2004 01:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Getting around to thanking you for remembering the oldies~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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beautiful!
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