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The Trail of Utter Woe

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tori
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0 posted 01-29-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Far from realities sleeve
Lost in fantasy's make believe
Caught within a web of greed
On The Trail of Utter Woe

As mystery binds its crusted branch
And Adapa clings to heavens glance
Forlorn live, with out a chance
On The Trail of Utter Woe

A Kingdom of poor deceit
Filled with starvation's grief
Where dead Mermaids lie on coral reef
On The Trail of Utter Woe

The search of Amrita, an endless path
Sanity sent by Sati's wrath
As feathers outweigh souls who pass
On The Trail of Utter Woe

Where Shu will cast the spirits high
As the sun is removed from the sky
No gold or mirth, in soil lie
On The Trail of Utter Woe

Štori 2000



 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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WhtDove
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1 posted 01-29-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey Tori, you graced us with some of your wonderful writing!!  And I see you got your picture uploaded too!  YEAH!!  You look good with short hair too!  
tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


2 posted 01-29-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Yeah kinda got it squished in there. lol.
HelmutB
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3 posted 01-29-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Hey Tori
A nice poem you have presented there
Just one thing, do such nice creatures have to die? I don't think that Walt Disney would agree.   "Where dead Mermaids lie on coral reef" Can I go and revieve them  
Still I love the poem. And the picture



 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

tori
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4 posted 01-29-2000 10:43 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Helmut depends on the Type's of Mermaids.. just aske them sailors that end up on the ocan floor how they got there?..lol as in "Death Song"...your a trip bud....lol
Can't help but love ya..

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 01-29-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tori,
When it comes to writing you're no slouch
Your tale of woe just filled the pouch.
It took the feathers from my bed
And filled it full of thorns instead.
Wonderful poem.
tori
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6 posted 01-29-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

lol.. ditto sey! 0
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