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Justina
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0 posted 01-28-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

As I lie here thinking of you
Emotions flow in ways
I am unable to describe
The mere thought of you
send chills through out my body
And the way your soft lips carress me
Is unforgetable
When you hold me in your arms
The sensation of sincerity
Is felt
And when I look into your deep Blue eyes
I feel what no other has given me!

© Copyright 2000 Justina - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-29-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful emotions! Very lovely, Justina!

Denise
Chris Goodman
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2 posted 01-29-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

Thanks for sharing your poem.  I enjoyed it.
Chris Goodman
Smore
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el paso


3 posted 01-29-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Smore   Email Smore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Smore

it was short, but intense, you capture your feelings well.

 Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.
Justina
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4 posted 01-30-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

Thanks guys, I am glad that you like!  I wrote it a while back, but reading it brings back those happy thoughts!!!  Take Care!

Justina
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


5 posted 01-30-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

I know exactly how you feel in your poem but I let that go and now you bring it back to me.  Thank you for that.  It is a memory I should never of let go.  Great work.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
Gene
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6 posted 01-30-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Very nice, Justina.

For me, a good poem is when you can express everything that needs to be said without a lot of superfluous fluff. I think you described your emotions very well. I liked it a lot.

Thanks, Gene  
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7 posted 01-30-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nicely said, Justina.
Enjoyed the simplicity.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 01-30-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

You have expressed your feelings well in this poem Justina - I liked it!   Roniece ..
Justina
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9 posted 01-30-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Justina   Email Justina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justina

Thanks again guys!  Too bad those feelings arent still there????  I suppose it's only a matter of time! = )    Take Care!!!!
Justina
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