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Justina
Junior Member

since 1999-10-31

Posts 24
Kansas City. MO

0 posted 2000-01-28 11:45 PM

As I lie here thinking of you
Emotions flow in ways
I am unable to describe
The mere thought of you
send chills through out my body
And the way your soft lips carress me
Is unforgetable
When you hold me in your arms
The sensation of sincerity
Is felt
And when I look into your deep Blue eyes
I feel what no other has given me!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-29 12:02 PM

Beautiful emotions! Very lovely, Justina!

Denise

Chris Goodman
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

2 posted 2000-01-29 12:03 PM

Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it.
Chris Goodman

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

3 posted 2000-01-29 12:21 PM

it was short, but intense, you capture your feelings well.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

Justina
Junior Member

since 1999-10-31

Posts 24
Kansas City. MO

4 posted 2000-01-30 12:48 PM

Thanks guys, I am glad that you like! I wrote it a while back, but reading it brings back those happy thoughts!!! Take Care!

Justina

White Wolf
Member

since 1999-09-18

Posts 371
Somewhere in the vast wasteland

5 posted 2000-01-30 01:41 AM

I know exactly how you feel in your poem but I let that go and now you bring it back to me. Thank you for that. It is a memory I should never of let go. Great work.

"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

6 posted 2000-01-30 01:50 AM

Very nice, Justina.

For me, a good poem is when you can express everything that needs to be said without a lot of superfluous fluff. I think you described your emotions very well. I liked it a lot.

Thanks, Gene

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-01-30 02:59 AM

Nicely said, Justina.
Enjoyed the simplicity.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2000-01-30 03:05 AM

You have expressed your feelings well in this poem Justina - I liked it! Roniece ..

Justina
Junior Member

since 1999-10-31

Posts 24
Kansas City. MO

9 posted 2000-01-30 12:30 PM

Thanks again guys! Too bad those feelings arent still there???? I suppose it's only a matter of time! = ) Take Care!!!!
Justina

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