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The proxy of dream
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The proxy of dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The proxy of dream I cannot vote the proxy of dream Nor can I say its symbol of mean. I only know I suffer them And never know the where or when. They turn the essence of tragic, Into the tincture of magic. They play another life for me. Within a field of greenery. And offer equal there as here. With much less pain and more of dear. So I in truth plead prejudice, On the side of dreams behest. And hold it up as real, as real, With love and even more appeal. It gives me all without disdain, Without the loss and all the gain. It gives me hope it gives me rife. It gives me love it gives me life. It sets my rhyme and rings my chime, So I live there most of the time. But I'm not here to sell the dream, I'm only here, to say its seem. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This poem has a great flow, Seymour! I love the dream imagery, too. A magical poem! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- You set my mind to dreaming before I even closed my eyes. On the morning it would seem ... I traipsed with abandon through Seymour's dream. This is floating softly through rhyme. I enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Loving all this smooth poetry. Thanks for sharing. Chris Goodman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very 'dreamy'....I love it! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, When I read this, I think it's about me, the dreamer. What else is there, if not a dream? This is a wonderful poem Exquisite, as always Love ya Liz |
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