Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A
Awesome debut! Very visual and it tickles the five senses like no other poem can. I'll be looking forward to your other works.
"We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less sense; more knowledge, but less judgement; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness. We have multiplies our possessions, but reduced our values. We've learned how to make a living, but not a life."