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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-28 09:27 PM



This was written just to make Toe smile, Jon and I came up with it over dinner...........  

Wonderfully creamy and white
each big mouthful
hides a crunchy delight?
Not so easily seen
here in the candlelight.
A splash of wine
will wash it away -
My dog looks at me
as if to say-
What's so wrong
with a little dirt
It doesn't taste bad
so what can it hurt?!

-SEA and Husband Jon-

Toe, you are the greatest!

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-01-28 10:05 PM


ROFL....I like this Sea, made me smile on a day where smiles aren't coming easy
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2 posted 2000-01-28 10:09 PM


Hoot..Glad we could give you a smile We had fun with it! -SEA
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3 posted 2000-01-28 11:33 PM


Sea, anything to do with eating dirt, Toe will love for sure. He's had a lot of experience in that field!!! Very cute poem.
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4 posted 2000-01-28 11:41 PM


This is cute, SEA and Jon! I'm sure he'll love it!  

Denise

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5 posted 2000-01-29 01:51 AM


Are you sure it was dirt? Maybe the potato patch was near the pasture?  

Cute poem!!!

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6 posted 2000-01-29 11:57 AM


Balladeer,Denise, and Poet......Jon and I did this just hoping for a smile. Glad to hear you enjoyed it!   -SEA
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7 posted 2000-01-29 06:55 PM


It fetched a smile from me as well  

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...

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8 posted 2000-01-29 09:00 PM


Love the smiling ones!  This is cute, SEA!


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9 posted 2000-01-29 09:01 PM


Dear SEA and Jon, you have my thanks
For sending Toe this grinner
Now he knows just what to serve
For that anniversary dinner!

LOL... Enjoyed!!!

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10 posted 2000-01-29 09:55 PM


LOL SEA this was good!  Brought me a grin! And those dogs have a way of saying that don't they?  hahah I know mine does!
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11 posted 2000-01-29 11:31 PM


RainbowGirl, Sherry, Whtdove, thanks you guys!
suthern, I don't think he's read it yet, I hope he likes it. He is such a nice guy. I'm glad you liked it. -SEA

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