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'Twas a Dream?

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Meadowmuse
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'Twas a Dream?"



'Twas a dream like no other
in soft slumber surreal
A recaptured arising
of my love's lone appeal

Entreating me never to
take wing down to sea
Embrace and ensheath
empty heart that is me

Bid me come dine with you
'pon our fair Isle of Man,
then in chambers, hushed whispers
'gainst the palm of my hand

Singing softly your sentiment
but withstanding protests
Bringing brightly the candlelight
nearest notions confessed

And at once I am open
And at once I am yours
And at once I am loved again
near the shadowed man's shores


Dear LadyClaire




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Nan
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1 posted 01-28-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, Claire - I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.....
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2 posted 01-28-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Me, too. The last stanza makes the poem. Good writing, Claire.
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3 posted 01-28-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent, Claire! And such a lovely dream!

Denise
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4 posted 01-29-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Wistful and sad. I loved it! Your writing always shines.

Mike
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5 posted 01-29-2000 07:57 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

A sad but well written Dream
So ellegantly filled the screen
Words aligned in clear line
Your poem so sad but such divine
Love and peace may come to you


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Oh, Meadowmuse, how you write! This piece is lovely....and I too, like the last stanza...beautiful
Seymour Tabin
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Meadow,
You write well and I enjoy your poems in particular this one. Sy
Martie
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You have a wonderful way with words, Claire.  I enjoyed this poem
Meadowmuse
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Thanks to all.

Dear LadyClaire


 
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