Yuma, AZ, USA
I thought this poem was done very well. Your scheme is well traditional, so of course it works. I liked how you pointed in the line "look in the mirror and see myself getting unclearer". That line just shows how men and women are when they get involved. Or at least how it should be. Not being able to tell where one ends and the other begins. The only thing I would change in your poem is adding the word bitter right before end in the sixth line. I think it might make the poem flow that much better, but that is just me. Keep up the good work.