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Evil One

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 01-28-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Please *guys* do NOT delete this one.  

Where I come from men act like they are men
when they behave like naughty *little* boys
I toss them over my shoulder like an old specimen
I have no time for pathetic small minded toys

If you want to play within our adult sphere
your true name should support your pitiful word
or don't you have the courage to be seen and appear
your actions are cowardly and totally absurd

Go back to your playground and play with the devil
cause you'll not hold any ground with me
when you are so ashamed of being on the level
cause in my book you are what *all* can see!



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).]
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1 posted 01-28-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

RainbowGirl, great piece I liked it very much. Strong words  
Dark Angel
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2 posted 01-28-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

RG, wow!! this is powerful!! and I love it!!
well done!! *hugs* my friend.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 01-28-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Yanno --

I don't know what all the fuss is about -- but I saw on that other post where this Evil One got my Bro Toe's ire up -- and now you too RG....

This won't do at all --

Evil One -- I don't know you or what you've done -- but you've managed to piss off two of the nicest people I know on the whole planet.

Also -- you now have two of the baddest people on the planet (me and toe) without any sympathy for whatever happens to you.

Toe -- you got south of the mason/dixon -- I'll take north bro...
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5 posted 01-28-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks guys...but I guess he doesn't have any kind of male hormones running through him...like I said...crèche must have shut early...

Sad fact of life that some boys will never grow into men!

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
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6 posted 01-28-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Good, now you're with me:  What next?????

Cause believe me, you come within distance and I'll give you just what you want...try me?...I may be soft, I may be gentle but oh boy, do not trust me when I'm near the cutlery drawer...I love a nicely honed edge and it looks so pretty round the edges of my pasty...ooops I mean pastry...bet you're not willing to come any closer, are you?



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).]
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7 posted 01-28-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

ROFL@pasty -- must have been a WH slip there RG....

Hmmm ... a woman with a knife... I'd run! LOL

Good guy -- just peace out man...
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8 posted 01-28-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Hey let's just have a beer and settle down now.......I mean good grief....It's Friday!!!!! -SEA

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9 posted 01-28-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Dear Mr. Good Guy,
I haven't entered into the continuing discourse, but would like to chat with you.
Would you please email me at RenoDA@rngov.reno.ks.us      would welcome the opportunity.  Thanks, Mike
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10 posted 01-28-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

NH: You got me...totally 100%..*g*

Bullies are such total cowards...here's your chance ladies, take the michael (oops, sorry) he is just a total jerk!!! (and I don't mean the nice kind in your hand)



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).]
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11 posted 01-28-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Well,

yanno it does seem kinda cowardly to go a poetry bulletin board and start picking on pretty lady poets... I mean ...gawd ... what balls on this man..

what balls -- where are they???

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Rainbow....you go girlfriend!!

And to whoever you are...getting your kicks out of being uncouth and just plain mean..speaks volumes about you  

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13 posted 01-28-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Well,

Looky here now.  It seems this gang of poets has run off the big bad Evil One...

Perhaps he'll try a kindergarten playground next time..
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14 posted 01-28-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

RG: Ya mean you didn't appreciate this new method of winning friends and influencing people? LOL
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15 posted 01-28-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Rainbow, you're too much of a lady to need to be concerned with emptying trash or cleaning mud off boots. This, er, fellow doesn't deserve your attention.....but I do like your style!
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16 posted 01-28-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Well guys, it's like this.....

Men that can behave as men I truly appreciate and love but small minded creatures that *try* to behave as men somehow come off sadly lacking, I guess they taste like mint instead of pineapple juice, you know....always looking at themselves in the mirror, no substance, no taste...hmmmmm...nothing like a wild woman, huh? and she only takes on men, at that!



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
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18 posted 01-28-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Who ever the heck you are........... You sure like stirrin the pot 'eh? Have a great Friday........GOOD GRIEF! -SEA
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19 posted 01-28-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Oh no

Little dick....

We're neither out of control nor are we full of anger.  We're just having fun exposing you for the idiot and coward you truly are...

oh I could do this all day...

And see -- you've run my posts up past 500 with all this horse manuer so now I'm even a senior member....
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20 posted 01-28-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Bal@ But I like to empty trash - in the bin! But I'll say this, when we women fear it is because no one will stand up and say "push off or get lost you pitiful bastard"..and that's what I'm aiming for because when we are afraid, we are scared and when we're scared we become vulnerable and I remember - being vulnerable - this guy is an absolute coward to the 9th degree and I want him HUNG!!!

And I'll tell you why:

Women are soft, we're loving, we care, we like to make our men feel loved, we like to be ourselves, we like to share our dreams and we like to share hugs but if we ever encounter a man that shows or treats our affection with violence it harms us for life!

Sorry, but I feel strongly about my HUGS, they mean a lot to me!



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).]
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22 posted 01-28-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Don't be sorry RG -- I take your hugs seriously too...

HuggsZ to you now

Evil Dick
I actually have a real life unlike you so- I have to go buy my kiddies some chalupas for supper -- but any time you want to rock and roll I'll be around numbnuts
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23 posted 01-28-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Ladies

The moral of this story is -- there is no need to be afraid of assholes like this guy.

Not only are they weak cowards, but there are a lot more of us out here than there are of them... so never, ever, let him intimidate you again.
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24 posted 01-28-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

SnlDad aka Good Guy aka BadBoy aka Smore aka,etc.
If you call your actions "having fun"...then you have my pity. We all welcomed you here and replied politely to your work, did nothing to offend you...so I'm left wondering why you've showed such disrespect to people that were only kind to you?
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25 posted 01-28-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

RainbowGirl,  you and I both know first hand the violence from a "man". Amazing what can stir that pain back up to the surface. Squash it before it gets too big. He isn't worth it. None of those kind ever are. I wonder if he knows if at 500 yards he would hear it before it hits him?! -SEA
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26 posted 01-28-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern: You know me my friend, only friends are worth the worry and you're one of them but the fact this guy attempts to place fear in my friends is enough to make me win " archer of the year" award...bullseye, type..

HUSG

Sea:  ROFL at 500 paces...you're in my mind sweetheart..

HUGS

Pepper:  Just tap your shoe sweetheart, it comes off fairly easily and disappears into nothing land..*g*

HUSG


 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
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27 posted 01-31-2000 04:14 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

My, my, my  !!! ... Ain't you pissed off sweetheart ? ...   ... now what does "the nice kind in your hand" mean ? ... HUSG
 
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