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A Deeper Bond

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 01-28-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

If I ever need an answer
I look into your eyes
To see into forever
Like looking at the sky

Bow my head in humble praise
And kneel before you
Offer up anything I have
And give my love to you

Time seems to magnify
As we go through so much
Only deepens the bond
Of hearts when we touch

They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light

No tricks that time can employ
Will ever our love destroy


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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 01-29-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

JML: You sound like a contender for my challenge, this is so romantic..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
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2 posted 01-29-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML-
Another perfectly beautiful, romantic poem.
~*Marge*~


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JOY 14
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3 posted 01-30-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

"They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light"

(My fav. verse.)  
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4 posted 01-30-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem definitely strikes at romantic heartstrings.
Gene
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5 posted 01-30-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

This is my fav, Joy:

"If I ever need an answer
I look into your eyes
To see into forever
Like looking at the sky"

Yes, love is infinite, JML.
Very nice.
~Gene

kitkat
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6 posted 01-30-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

another lovely piece JML. you are such a romantic. Lucky is the lady in your life.
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 02-01-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Wow, you guys humble me. And now I wish in high school, I would have used love letters I wrote for friends, for myself. But I just gave away bunches being too shy. 13 years later, I am over that. *S*
What was your challenge RainbowGirl?
Thanks again.
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8 posted 02-01-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, I agree, this is soooooo romantic! Simply wonderful, JML!
Denise
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Oh so wonderfully romantic  
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Bow my head in humble praise
And kneel before you
Offer up anything I have
And give my love to you

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They say that stars revolve
Around the moon in the night
Just as I am with you
And burn from your fiery light

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on your knees offering...what more could a girl ask for...(smile)
very romantic and devoted...
lucky girl...
stalking you always,
your jm
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*smiling*
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