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Just After The Laundry Mat

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Toerag
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Ala bam a


0 posted 01-28-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Today
While washing my clothes
A young newlywed couple
Left the laundrymat together
The sweet new bride
Pulling a laundry cart
Was smiling
They smiled at each other
Her new husband
gave the cart
A little kick
Then a giggle.




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Balladeer
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1 posted 01-28-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

What is this? The new Toerag? The "hey look at me I'm a real guy with feelings and not the bully that kicks around Balladeer and LongJhn all the time" Toerag? HRMPH!! We'll see.

You should stick with this style. It suits you......and you do it well, my friend.
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2 posted 01-28-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Ahhhh... if only the days when anything done together is a celebration would last. *S* Well done, Toe!!
Ted Reynolds
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3 posted 01-28-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

I do like this, and also hope to see a few more such vignettes from you.  It helps remind me I should be watching people with more attention and more affection every day.  Thanks, Toerag.
Nan
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4 posted 01-28-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How domestic of you, Toe...
WhtDove
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5 posted 01-28-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL!!!  Rest assured that smile won't remain there long!!  haha...
Martie
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6 posted 01-28-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so sweet--I am watching all the time for this stuff--missed this one.  
Corinne
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7 posted 01-28-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Toe,

this is very sweet!  Letting the reader see inside of us is usually when we are at our best, don't you think?

Corinne
 
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