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Feel So Alive

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PoeticKnight
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All things in Nature speak
Of balance and harmony
Things all who strive to seek
Say how they want it to be
Nothing is as true
As the moon in the nighttime sky
Nothing quite as pure
As the look in your eyes
I canít escape what makes me so tragic
I alone, know what that thing is
Some sort of elemental magic,
To pretend this is where I always live

Never have I felt every nerve on fire
Never have I ever felt so alive

Cool wind blowing through my hair
Moonlight shining upon my face
How much do I want to stay there
In that dark and lonely place
Alone, you and I forever are
Never let the feelings restrain
Down comes the bright and eternal stars
Washing us clean with cool, sweet rain
All things in Nature conspire
To not release me, just yet;
Knowing full well how inspired,
I am at being so wet

Never have I felt every nerve on fire
Never have I ever felt so alive


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Nan
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1 posted 02-01-2000 07:52 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

A poem that speaks with such vivacity is surely worth another lap.... I like this one, JML...
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This is breathtakingly elemental,  alive with sensorial beauty. Excellent writing, JML!


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3 posted 02-01-2000 09:51 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks Nan, I enjoy being taken out on another lap. *S*
And Claire, thanks, it is easy to be inspired when you feel alive, and when do you feel more alive then when Nature conspires? On a day like I wrote this, if you didn't feel alive, then you have to be dead inside.
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WOW! The energy just flows through this one!
My, my, my! This is fabulous, JML!
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Cool wind blowing through my hair
Moonlight shining upon my face
How much do I want to stay there
In that dark and lonely place
Alone, you and I forever are
Never let the feelings restrain
Down comes the bright and eternal stars
Washing us clean with cool, sweet rain
All things in Nature conspire
To not release me, just yet;
Knowing full well how inspired,
I am at being so wet

Never have I felt every nerve on fire
Never have I ever felt so alive

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I LOVE this poem...it is breathtaking....truly...it just floats and flows as one reads it...I love the view thru your eyes...
excellent...
still stalking,
your jm
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