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Sven
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Close your eyes
Open your mind
Let your soul take flight
And leave your cares behind

Feel the breeze
See the sun
Let your heart take flight
And let us soar together as one

Chase the clouds
See the light
Take my hand I know the way
To where the stars shine bright

Come with me
I am here
Together we'll escape this darkness
And free you from your fear

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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Sven...I like the formatting you used with this one. It works well and flows well.Another romantic piece
Isis
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Kindred, I am waiting for you to show me the way.  So, when do we depart?  Thanks hon .

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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I hope you have somebody in your life to appreciate all your good poetry...
Sven
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Thank you all. . .

Isis. . . as soon as you're ready. . .

Nan. . . I do have someone who appreciates my poetry. . .haven't you seen her in my writing?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Another beautiful romantic piece of writing, Sven!  

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Sven, this is most delightful! -SEA
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YOu know it has always been my dream to fly. I always talk to my friends about it. What a wonderful feeling, but this poem helped me to picture clearly, myself flying and looking down and around nature. Thanks for this brief flight.

 "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with."
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