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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Close your eyes Open your mind Let your soul take flight And leave your cares behind Feel the breeze See the sun Let your heart take flight And let us soar together as one Chase the clouds See the light Take my hand I know the way To where the stars shine bright Come with me I am here Together we'll escape this darkness And free you from your fear ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sven...I like the formatting you used with this one. It works well and flows well.Another romantic piece  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Kindred, I am waiting for you to show me the way. So, when do we depart? Thanks hon . Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I hope you have somebody in your life to appreciate all your good poetry...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Isis. . . as soon as you're ready. . . Nan. . . I do have someone who appreciates my poetry. . .haven't you seen her in my writing? --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautiful romantic piece of writing, Sven!  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven, this is most delightful! -SEA |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
YOu know it has always been my dream to fly. I always talk to my friends about it. What a wonderful feeling, but this poem helped me to picture clearly, myself flying and looking down and around nature. Thanks for this brief flight. "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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