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Pepper
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0 posted 01-28-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Pepper



Balladeer's getting a Mercedes
today
Oh Boy! Oh Boy! Oh Boy!
This is the car he's dreamed of
His pride, his joy, his toy

Can't you see him tooling around
town?
So handsome for all to see
The ladies waving their hankies
around
"Oh please Sir...Please notice
me!"

So our Balladeer's getting his
Mercedes today
A dream it seems has come true
The man, the car, the ladies, the
power
Happy driving my 'Deer to you...


Okay guys, give me a break!...The
medication, you know....hehehe
© Copyright 2000 Shannon - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-28-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*smiling widely here* what a way to make an announcement my friend  
Congrats Balladeer  
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-28-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Pepper! You posted a wonderful poem!
I'm jumping up and down!
Way to go!
Liz
Martie
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3 posted 01-28-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hey Shannon, can I have some of that medicine?  What is it called, Muse elixer?
Loved your poem!
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 01-28-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Love your poem, Pepper!!!!! And congrats to Balladeer!
Local Rebel
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5 posted 01-28-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Baladeer was seen tooling round town
His brow was furrowed
His gaze cast down
Everyone said 'Oh Deer
Please what could it Be??'
To which he replied,
'Merce(y)dese payments --
they're killing me!!'

Very nice work Pepper!!!

Congratulations Baladeer

(BTW Pepper -- you asked me sometime back about getting Cuban Cigars -- you have to go to Canada or Mexico to get them -- but they really aren't worth the trouble dear -- the Domincan's are just as good and sometimes better -- but they all come from 'Cuban Seed' tobacco -- which was my reference in that poem.)
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 01-28-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Pepper: LOL...How long before a poem emerges from Bal about his new pride'n'joy?

Well done sweetheart...*g*

HUSG



 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...
Balladeer
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7 posted 01-28-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, I'm sorry for all the confusion, folks. You see, I met this cute little Cuban girl on South Beach last week named Mercedes and when I said I was picking up ....ONLY KIDDING!!!

Pepper, this is a fantastic poem, you self-proclaimed non-writing poet, you. Man, you can write with the best of them!

Thanks for all the nice comments....you have it right, Rebel. But I've been a junk and clunker kind of guy all my life (like a Toerag, you know) so I just said why not???

God bless bugs!!!!  
Denise
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8 posted 01-28-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wooohoooooo...way to go, Pepper!! See, I said you were a poet!!! This is great!!!  

Congrats, Balladeer....I guess them darn bugs are good for something after all!  
Pepper
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Thank you  
Hoot, I'm so glad to see that
smile ..and btw., it's very becoming
on you!
Liz, Thank you for the
wonderful...means alot to me  
Martie, I'll share my muse, if you'll
share yours..Now who do you suppose
gets the better deal here?    
Suthern, Thank you for your
comment....I'm smiling big time  
Local Rebel, Wow..I've never had a poem
of mine inspire a poetry reply  
That's really cool! And thank you for
the cigar info  
Rainbow, I don't have an answer to your
question..just a guess. Knowing how
men love their cars..shouldn't be too
long,eh?... lol Thank you for all your
support HUSG...
Denise, A WhoooHooooo...WhooHoo!  
Thank you very much
Balladeer,ROFL@^$*% Cuban girl named
Mercedes.... What are you doing at
home? Get in that gorgeous car, open up the sun roof, turn on the sounds and
maybe head on down to South Beach..
LOL    



  
WhtDove
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10 posted 01-28-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Pepper this was fantastic!  Looks as though I'm a little late here...hehe thank for letting me know.  Balladeer's right ya know...you do it with the best of them...and I meant writing poetry!  Hugs to ya!!

Congrats Bal!
Nan
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11 posted 01-28-2000 11:18 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Pepper, You're a simply wonderful poet....

Deer.... Can I have a ride???
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 01-28-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Pepper-
This is precious and wonderful.
And of course I'm happy for Balladeer.
I'm not even jealous or anything !
I'm not !
Can't think of a nicer fellow for
it to come to.  
Way to go, Michael.
I'm not even jealous or anything !

Oh, can we put the top down and
go to the beach ?

KAMLA ! .... Balladeer's going
'nekkid' to the beach !
But it's okay ... I've got a towel
for him !

Pepper .... keep those news stories coming.
Great poetic announcement, gal.
Love ... love .... love ~*Marge*~




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Poet deVine
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13 posted 01-29-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a special treat! A poem from Pepper! I swear there was another member around here with that same name who said "I can't write poetry"..hmmm...couldn't be the same one, as this Pepper can! She just proved it!

Good one!!!  
Munda
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14 posted 01-29-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I can't say it any better than Devine just did....great poem Pepper and please, please, write more....also without the medication  
HelmutB
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15 posted 01-29-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Whatever pills you having send me one
What a nice poem and so well done
A "Mercedes" and the pill
Watch out there Balladeer don't hit an oily spill  
"Mercedes" was the daughter from Mr Daimler or Mr Benz
For Balladeer another "Girl" I guess it's all what depends lol
So ladies don't step up in line
He is with a four wheeled Lady and ain't on a set of in-line'
I guess I let him drive the "better" (Star class)
Well done there, I enjoyed this Pepper  

  
Pepper
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WhtDove, Thank you Dovey...fantastic is, well, fantastic..

Nan, Gee..thank you so much for your encouragement.."wonderful poet"..me?...WOW  

Marge, ROFL.."I'm not even jealous or anything"...hehehe...my sentiments exactly! Thank you & love, love,love, right back at you..

PdV...Your reply thrilled me! ...if you think I'm a poet...well then, ..maybe I am?   Thank you so very much...

Munda, Thank you much for your lovely reply

Helmut, Love your poem reply   lol...Thank you for reading and commenting...I really enjoy your work  
Marilyn
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17 posted 01-29-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Whoo Hoo Pepper! I love it when you write! Great job girl.

Mike...*putting on my best dress and waiting on the bug man's shiny car to drive byt so I can hike up the hem line and catch a ride* ...lol
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 01-29-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Well you just proved what I said all along,
you can write with the best of them. A wonderful poem and news I did not know. Mike
never mentioned the Mercedes to me. Post more we do so enloy your poems. *L* Sy
Julie
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19 posted 01-29-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Bravo Bravo Lady!
A poet you say you are not
but the words flow and never stop
I've seen it all along waiting to crop
So let it flow from within you
I will read them all not just one or two.
-----------------------------------------
Michael's on the road with his new wheels
Giving all the ladies chills
His charasmatic words will not be a need
when he drive up on Main with his new steed.
A true stud muffin you are Mr. 'deer
Watch out ladies Bal has new gear.


Isis
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20 posted 01-29-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Bravo Pepper!!  Funny and well done  
Studley take me cruising please?  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Severn
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21 posted 01-30-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Excuse me, 'deer?!!

But WHAT, hmmhmm, happened to the JET? So you want to be on MY priority list huh? HUMPH...well, sniff, sob, I see how far down I am on yours...

waaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllll!!
Here come those hills again...

Pepper - I admire your poetry my friend - and you certainly can write!! (Though for a meanie like 'deer who has spurned me yet again...)

I will never believe you cannot write...please give us more!!!

Marge(y)...I'm all for it...but I certainly will spend a lot of time looking at the sky...



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22 posted 01-30-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Pepper, this was so fun to read! Glad he got the toy of his dreams.....me, I'm holding out  for that little red corvette! -SEA
Sunshine
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Pepper, you didn't tell me you posted this...keeping secrets?  Kudos, dear girl, albeit it COULD have been the meds...

And Deer, no matter whether the Mercedes is girl or wheels, IT probably has one classy chassey.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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24 posted 01-30-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

This poem I enjoyed very much.  And then to find out that Mercedes is a girl  .  OH MY!!!  Well good job and keep these upbeat poems coming.
 
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