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Do I Love Thee?

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PoeticKnight
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Do I love thee?

Are there countless stars,
Like ways in which I love?
Are there countless dreams,
In which to dream of?

The question asked
One too many times
For an answer
Found within our minds

Given the choice between
Thee, and the ever changing sky
How could I choose thus,
Where thoughts of you reside?

How can you quantify love?
And how can you compare?
Love seems different from points of view
Between those that love is shared

Do I love thee?

Not as pure as a woman loves a man;
Yet, with all that I am

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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-28-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*sighing* who could ever ask for more? Beautiful
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 01-28-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks hoot owl....i never would have thought that these things would have any effect like that, thanks again.
Janet Marie
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Given the choice between
Thee, and the ever changing sky
How could I choose thus,
Where thoughts of you reside?

How can you quantify love?
And how can you compare?
Love seems different from points of view
Between those that love is shared

Do I love thee?

Not as pure as a woman loves a man;
Yet, with all that I am
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WORKS for me...oh yes...
I love those last lines...perfection of your mind...and heart...very nice...
perfect ending thought.
stalking you with pleasure...
your jm
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