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Do I Love Thee?
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Do I Love Thee? |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Do I love thee? Are there countless stars, Like ways in which I love? Are there countless dreams, In which to dream of? The question asked One too many times For an answer Found within our minds Given the choice between Thee, and the ever changing sky How could I choose thus, Where thoughts of you reside? How can you quantify love? And how can you compare? Love seems different from points of view Between those that love is shared Do I love thee? Not as pure as a woman loves a man; Yet, with all that I am |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighing* who could ever ask for more? Beautiful  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks hoot owl....i never would have thought that these things would have any effect like that, thanks again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Given the choice between Thee, and the ever changing sky How could I choose thus, Where thoughts of you reside? How can you quantify love? And how can you compare? Love seems different from points of view Between those that love is shared Do I love thee? Not as pure as a woman loves a man; Yet, with all that I am ------------------ WORKS for me...oh yes... I love those last lines...perfection of your mind...and heart...very nice... perfect ending thought. stalking you with pleasure...  your jm |
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