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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-01-28 09:05 AM


Life's Season's

Our lives are like the wind that blows
Where we'll end noone knows
Blowing through the tree's
Moving round the clouds
Our lives move up and down until we stand on solid ground
Our lives are like the stars
Sometimes bright at others distant
Sometimes it's like the rain torrential and persistant
Our lives are like the seasons, many changes do pass through
Without these many changes our lives could not renew

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 2000-01-28 09:58 AM


Tracie: I like the analogy..

HUGS

Koon
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2 posted 2000-01-28 10:20 AM


So true...nice poem  
tracie66
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3 posted 2000-01-28 05:30 PM


Thanks a bunch rainbow girl and koon. nice replys.  tracie  
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