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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-01-28 08:59 AM


Endlessly

Endlessly I wait for you
Endlessly I'm yours
Endlessly I give you my heart
Endlessly for sure
All my love
All my soul
I give to you for all time
so endlessly I wait for you, until you can be mine
Someday I won't have to wait, endlessly for you
because someday you'll be mine
and my endless days will be through



© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Koon
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1 posted 2000-01-28 09:11 AM


Good luck in your wait.....coz I'm waiting for mine too....
Local Rebel
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2 posted 2000-01-28 09:16 AM


The waiting is the hardes't part... except for the getting -- and then the happily ever after --

nice poem here!!!

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-01-28 09:16 AM


Dear koon
Thankyou for your reply. Yes I have found my true love, this poem was written along time ago and I'm endlessly in love now. I hope you find yours soon.  
tracie

tracie66
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4 posted 2000-01-28 09:17 AM


Local rebel
nice reply, Thanks
tracie  

Sven
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5 posted 2000-01-28 12:55 PM


Your wait will soon be over my friend. . . I know that I finally had to MAKE mine end. . . but sometimes, we do what we have to do. . .

Beautiful words. . . they perfectly express how I was feeling before I didn't have to wait any longer. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-01-28 02:45 PM


Tracie...a lovely expression of feelings into words  
tracie66
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7 posted 2000-01-28 05:24 PM


Sven thankyou my friend for your sweet reply. Yes my wait is over has been for about 14 years now. I wrote this poem along time ago. Thanks once again for your reply  
tracie

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-01-28 05:26 PM


Ruth I thankyou also for your reply. much appreciated.
tracie    

Denise
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9 posted 2000-01-28 05:28 PM


This is lovely, Tracie!  I hope your dreams come true!

Denise  

tracie66
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10 posted 2000-01-29 12:09 PM


thanks for your reply Denise. My dreams did come true....Tracie  
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-01-29 04:22 AM


Now you can love him endlessly
Sweet poem. I like it
Liz

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-01-30 05:51 AM


Thanks Liz for reading my poem...Tracie
HelmutB
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13 posted 2000-01-30 08:55 AM


Endlessly I could have kept on reading
Endlessly I wanted this to linger on
Endlessly I like to read this
But I guess I have to let you go, so you can go on
What a nice piece tracie66, well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


LngJhnAg
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14 posted 2000-01-30 09:02 AM


Tracie - The idea of time fits so well with true love because the times when two lovers are apart seem endless, and the times they are together seem to end too soon.  This is a very sweet poem.
Buffpimp
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15 posted 2000-01-30 09:55 AM


This is very touching.  I am currently waiting "endlessly" for my love too.  KEep it up

tracie66
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16 posted 2000-01-30 06:10 PM


Thanks to Helmut, LngJhnAg and Buffpimp for your comments much appreciated...Tracie  

SEA
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17 posted 2000-01-30 11:17 PM


Tracie, that wait felt like forever huh! So glad your love is with you now!   -SEA
tracie66
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18 posted 2000-01-31 08:07 AM


Dear Sea thankyou for your reply my endless days are over...      
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