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tracie66
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0 posted 01-28-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Endlessly

Endlessly I wait for you
Endlessly I'm yours
Endlessly I give you my heart
Endlessly for sure
All my love
All my soul
I give to you for all time
so endlessly I wait for you, until you can be mine
Someday I won't have to wait, endlessly for you
because someday you'll be mine
and my endless days will be through


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Koon
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1 posted 01-28-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for Koon   Email Koon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Koon

Good luck in your wait.....coz I'm waiting for mine too....
Local Rebel
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2 posted 01-28-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

The waiting is the hardes't part... except for the getting -- and then the happily ever after --

nice poem here!!!
tracie66
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3 posted 01-28-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear koon
Thankyou for your reply. Yes I have found my true love, this poem was written along time ago and I'm endlessly in love now. I hope you find yours soon.  
tracie
tracie66
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4 posted 01-28-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Local rebel
nice reply, Thanks
tracie  
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5 posted 01-28-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Your wait will soon be over my friend. . . I know that I finally had to MAKE mine end. . . but sometimes, we do what we have to do. . .

Beautiful words. . . they perfectly express how I was feeling before I didn't have to wait any longer. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

hoot_owl_rn
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Tracie...a lovely expression of feelings into words  
tracie66
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Sven thankyou my friend for your sweet reply. Yes my wait is over has been for about 14 years now. I wrote this poem along time ago. Thanks once again for your reply  
tracie
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8 posted 01-28-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Ruth I thankyou also for your reply. much appreciated.
tracie    
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9 posted 01-28-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Tracie!  I hope your dreams come true!

Denise  
tracie66
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thanks for your reply Denise. My dreams did come true....Tracie  
Elizabeth Santos
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Now you can love him endlessly
Sweet poem. I like it
Liz
tracie66
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12 posted 01-30-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Thanks Liz for reading my poem...Tracie
HelmutB
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13 posted 01-30-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Endlessly I could have kept on reading
Endlessly I wanted this to linger on
Endlessly I like to read this
But I guess I have to let you go, so you can go on
What a nice piece tracie66, well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

LngJhnAg
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14 posted 01-30-2000 09:02 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Tracie - The idea of time fits so well with true love because the times when two lovers are apart seem endless, and the times they are together seem to end too soon.  This is a very sweet poem.
Buffpimp
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15 posted 01-30-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

This is very touching.  I am currently waiting "endlessly" for my love too.  KEep it up
tracie66
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Thanks to Helmut, LngJhnAg and Buffpimp for your comments much appreciated...Tracie  
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17 posted 01-30-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tracie, that wait felt like forever huh! So glad your love is with you now!   -SEA
tracie66
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18 posted 01-31-2000 08:07 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Sea thankyou for your reply my endless days are over...      
 
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