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Auricom45
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0 posted 01-28-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for Auricom45   Email Auricom45   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auricom45's Home Page   View IP for Auricom45

Rain
Dark clouds, dark sea
Rain pours from the sky
Dark mind, let it be
Kiss the sun goodbye
Shadows lost, vision hard
A dark silhouette of drips
Good feelings, I discard
Bad feelings I dismiss
Water falls, water crash
Never ending stare
All is gone, light is crashed
What is is hidden, never aware
It stops, light pours
Back to normal, rain gone by
Leaves dry, seeds spore
Another storm comes from the corner of my eye



 That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together.

© Copyright 2000 Milton a.k.a. Mil - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 01-28-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I hope you have some sunshine in between these storms cause then you'll get a rainbow..

HUGS
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2 posted 01-28-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Reminds me of my own poems about rain. . .the one thing that I have learned is that the rain does end. . . and the sun warms. . .

Excellent work my friend and welcome. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

hoot_owl_rn
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In my book, you can't write a bad poem about the rain  
tracie66
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Loved it Auricom. Excellent    
tracie
Denise
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Sad yet beautifully done! I wish you sunny weather!

Denise

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