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My Heart On My Sleeve - 'Suthern Style'
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My Heart On My Sleeve - 'Suthern Style' |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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My Heart On My Sleeve ~Marge Tindal~ I wear my heart on my sleeve. It's there for all to see. I share my heart with all who say ... let me join you, please. Some people think that to show it you should not. When you wear it on your sleeve you get hurt a lot. Nay, with them I disagree... it's been there, it will remain there, it's your entrance into me. Some say there are those who will try to hurt you if you wear your heart on your sleeve. But, I'd rather think that it's up to me ... who stays and who must leave. The friends who enter this heart of mine will see in just a minute, you must have love to stay ... there's not room for conflict in it. So when you look my way, my heart on my sleeve you see ... know that you may enter the very heart of me. *Inspired by Suthern ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
May I please come in? Marge, what would we do without you? This poem is YOU! Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 01-28-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This poem is beautiful, and so full of love. The day may be short or long, but with the kindness you exhibit freely the world can carry on. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
very beautiful, and yep know just what you mean  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- It was so easy to let you in, love. Thank you for staying. Lost Dreamer- Thank you ... I'm glad you feel that way. FC- Thanks for liking it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your loving heart shows through beautifully in this Marge!! Very lovely!! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Afraid I can't believe you, Marge, unless you've got a sleeve the size of Texas, that is!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Awwwww, Marge!!! If I wasn't such a mean ole biddy, I'd just cry! *S* I don't generally inspire poems... much less such beautiful ones! You honor me... thank you!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are the owner of the biggest heart! Lovely poem, lovely you. Thanks for opening that door for me. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge,wearing your heart on your sleeve is a sign of your strength- not your weakness! Such beautiful words from such a beautiful heart! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- Thank you ... it's easy to speak my heart when I've got such great friends. Balladeer- Sweetheart, Texas ain't got nuthin' on the size of this Florida heart. (3 1/2 hours huh? Tempting !) Suthern- Well, you 'mean ole biddy' quit your blubbering ! You inspired it and that's that ! Martie- Thank YOU .. for entering. SEA- Strength, huh? Well, if that's true ..... I'M SUPERWOMAN ! Love and smiles to all ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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