How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #5 Archive
 Our Star
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Our Star

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Lucie
Senior Member
since 06-20-99
Posts 1123
Houston


0 posted 01-28-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I closed my eyes and took a breath and softly said I do.
I never stopped to think how hard it would be without you.
And as I celebrate again without you by my side.
T’would be easier to count the stars then all the tears I’ve cried.

This year has been so difficult, but I still feel the same.
As the moment that I stood there and proudly took your name.
And as the time draws nearer for them to send you home to me.
I can not help but dream about the way that it will be.

I promised on that day it was for better or for worse.
And marriage is just not a part of life you can rehearse.
But if this is the worst that we will ever have to face.
Then in this year there’s not a moment I would have replaced.

I love you more this moment then I ever thought I could.
And I know were it possible to be here that you would.
I whisper softly to "Our Star", Happy Anniversary.
I turn and pull my pillow close wishing you were here with me.



 With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.
© Copyright 2000 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 01-03-2000
Posts 8382


1 posted 01-28-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Reflective, lonely and beautiful like starlight itself.

Mike
devina
Member Elite
since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


2 posted 01-28-2000 02:45 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Such longing Lucie...I hope that man of yours gets home to you soon!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


3 posted 01-28-2000 05:42 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucie-
This is tenderly lovely.
Sounds like joy ahead.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 01-28-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Lucie...how heart wrenchingly sad  
Lucie
Senior Member
since 06-20-99
Posts 1123
Houston


5 posted 01-28-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies.
Mike
Member Elite
since 06-19-99
Posts 2528


6 posted 01-28-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice.  A lucky man.
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 07-29-99
Posts 20770
on the threshold of a dream


7 posted 01-28-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Beautiful, beautiful Lucie!!!
Lucie will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #5 >> Our Star Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors