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Because of You

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G. A. Webb
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since 01-21-2000
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Stanton, California, USA


0 posted 01-28-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

Because of you I view the world through a different pair of eyes
It takes control and grabs my soul and makes me realize
That the child within has been released and now tells me what to do
To spread my love across the land and it's all because of you

Because of you I feel the love that I thought would never be
A love so pure and so sweet is what you give to me
I write these words upon this page so that the world can't misconstrue
That the feelings I have deep in my heart are all because of you

G.A. Webb
© Copyright 2000 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 01-28-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I do hope you shared these words with her....wonderfully romantic are they  
G. A. Webb
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2 posted 01-28-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Hoot...I e-mailed this to her when I wrote it a while ago. She didn't have too much to say about it other than the fact that she liked it. I fear my words have become nothing more than a novelty to her. That's why I don't write love poems any more. The ones I have posted and the few I have left to post were written some time ago. Let's just say that I've lost my inspiration in that area. If you check out Dark Passions you'll see what I mean. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

G

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Balladeer
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3 posted 01-28-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I'm sorry to hear it, G.A. At least you had the feeling and made the effort. That counts, if not for her, at least for you. Good writing.
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 01-28-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

G A...to be told that one is the impetus and inspiration that you've written about here  would bring the most grand sense of sweetness...this is a wonderful tribute. I hope she'll come round.  

Claire
Denise
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5 posted 01-29-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful! Very very nice!

Denise
WhtDove
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6 posted 01-29-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

GA I love your poem!!  I'm sorry to hear that she didn't say to much about it! Certainly her loss!  But I hope there comes a time when you will be inspired again. You do so well with those words.

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 01-29-2000 05:40 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sometimes sorrow itself can be an inspiration to write. Anything you feel can be put into words, and may turn out to be your best. Please don't ever stop writing
Liz
 
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